mary* 10 Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 Hope I did this thread in a right place. so, this is my english project about London:naughty: (some of mfcers knew i was making this) and i want to ask you all, is it good, or what should I add HELP! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
mary* 10 Posted October 28, 2011 Author Share Posted October 28, 2011 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
qwurtie 12 Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 It's good ;D except....WHERE IS MIKA???!? :aah: Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Mina Alisa 23 Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 wow looks great!!! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Crick! 10 Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 You did a great job, and I think it's very useful! I love England Quote Link to post Share on other sites
doll_of_death 12 Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 It's very good Mary:thumb_yello:your teacher will like it for sure:naughty: Quote Link to post Share on other sites
mary* 10 Posted October 28, 2011 Author Share Posted October 28, 2011 thank you all guys! but don't you think it needs smth to add? or make it even shorter? It's good ;D except....WHERE IS MIKA???!? :aah: in that college above Quote Link to post Share on other sites
silver 16,200 Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 Do you want your English corrected? For example we would say just "Chinatown", not "The Chinatown". Quote Link to post Share on other sites
mary* 10 Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 Do you want your English corrected? For example we would say just "Chinatown", not "The Chinatown". thank you can you tell me please if there's still any mistake? Quote Link to post Share on other sites
mikahepburn 12 Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 viewing this thread just making me want to go to England more Quote Link to post Share on other sites
STEP___ 10 Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Hope I did this thread in a right place. so, this is my english project about London:naughty: (some of mfcers knew i was making this) and i want to ask you all, is it good, or what should I add HELP! It's so good, you did really well. I think you shouldn't add more, but don't shorten it either! Only one remark, English is not my mothertongue, but I have a feeling this one sentence isn't so fluent: "its history going back to its founding founding by the Romans,..." I'm not sure, but wouldn't be "its history goes back to its founding..." be better? Not sure though. You could be right too! It's just quite a long sentence I think:aah: Quote Link to post Share on other sites
mary* 10 Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 It's so good, you did really well. I think you shouldn't add more, but don't shorten it either!Only one remark, English is not my mothertongue, but I have a feeling this one sentence isn't so fluent: "its history going back to its founding founding by the Romans,..." I'm not sure, but wouldn't be "its history goes back to its founding..." be better? Not sure though. You could be right too! It's just quite a long sentence I think:aah: I have no idea I copied it from Wikipedia hope it's correct, if not it's ok Quote Link to post Share on other sites
astor 10 Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 It's so good, you did really well. I think you shouldn't add more, but don't shorten it either!Only one remark, English is not my mothertongue, but I have a feeling this one sentence isn't so fluent: "its history going back to its founding founding by the Romans,..." I'm not sure, but wouldn't be "its history goes back to its founding..." be better? Not sure though. You could be right too! It's just quite a long sentence I think:aah: Yes, I would say this makes more sense Quote Link to post Share on other sites
lollipop_monkey 102 Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 I'm not sure, but wouldn't "its history goes back to its founding..." be better? Not sure though. You could be right too! It's just quite a long sentence I think:aah: This is correct - you would use "goes" rather than "going" in this sentence. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
crazyaboutmika 8,828 Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Great job Shouldn't this be in the homework thread though? It's a school project, not a MFC project... Quote Link to post Share on other sites
lollipop_monkey 102 Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 Great job Shouldn't this be in the homework thread though? It's a school project, not a MFC project... Yeah, I was debating whether or not to move it. Good call - I'll move it to the chinwagging section. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
mary* 10 Posted October 30, 2011 Author Share Posted October 30, 2011 I changed "going" with "goes", thank you guys Yeah, I was debating whether or not to move it. Good call - I'll move it to the chinwagging section. thanks I didn't know where to make this thread Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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