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This is my most recent painting. Unfortunately, I don't think it photgraphed as well as it looks in real life. It makes me feel soo happy. It's not the most techincal thing I've done, but it just makes me feel good- I had a lot of fun painting it. :biggrin2:

 

Maybe I'll post more later. :fisch:

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This is my most recent painting. Unfortunately, I don't think it photgraphed as well as it looks in real life. It makes me feel soo happy. It's not the most techincal thing I've done, but it just makes me feel good- I had a lot of fun painting it. :biggrin2:

 

Maybe I'll post more later. :fisch:

 

i LOVE it! :punk: i love surrealism in general (i hope that;s what you've intended it to be:cool: )

I do art too.. but my work isn't that good :mf_rosetinted:

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This is my most recent painting. Unfortunately, I don't think it photgraphed as well as it looks in real life. It makes me feel soo happy. It's not the most techincal thing I've done, but it just makes me feel good- I had a lot of fun painting it. :biggrin2:

 

Maybe I'll post more later. :fisch:

 

Beautiful!!!

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i'm not much of a poet.. just wrote this one poem.. it's kinda sad unlike my usual self.. i hope it makes sense.. let me know what you think

 

Articles lay around

The background music to my life

But not another sound

Externally

 

But on the other side

The dwelling, I can hear the needles drop

Its piercing

A surface, a cycle, a hurricane of emotions

The sound of letting go

 

Inside out

So self absorbed, inwards and around

Conformity, reality, tranquillity and explosion

To question, conjecture

There’s someone in the distance

 

Collisions

Hard, shiny, polished surfaces

Scraping and scratching

Screech eternally

Some swelling

Plane damage

 

It grows, inhabits

Takes over, inhibits

Liberation, tied down

Reach out

No person in the distance

 

Awaiting a reaction

Combination, a clump, a knot, a sudden contraction

Bang, let loose

Expansion

 

Interesting!!!

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I just wrote this poem and it's basically my first one so let's not be harsh :naughty:

 

Hello there my linear tree

See my face,

Are you as happy as me?

For you see my love,

you were meant for me;

to guide my way

with your linear leaves

 

Through the ups and downs

you shield my pain;

Provide me shelter

in the pouring rain

But I know what is now

must come to an end

Your branches keep growing,

but they don't seem to end

 

Forever you will always remain in my heart

But please don't forget,

this is only the start

Please don't fear my friend,

for I will come back to see

My neverending friend,

My linear tree

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This is my most recent painting. Unfortunately, I don't think it photgraphed as well as it looks in real life. It makes me feel soo happy. It's not the most techincal thing I've done, but it just makes me feel good- I had a lot of fun painting it. :biggrin2:

 

Maybe I'll post more later. :fisch:

 

That is BEAUTIFUL! I love how you can clearly see the winding of the plastic cover on the stick, incredible!!!

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I love your painting! :biggrin2: You're very talented.

I love surrealism. Dali and Magritte are my favourite artists....

 

Beautiful!!!

 

That is BEAUTIFUL! I love how you can clearly see the winding of the plastic cover on the stick, incredible!!!

 

Thank you for your compliments!!! :blush-anim-cl: I don't know what to give Mika at the show- if anything, this is all I could think of. But I don't really want to. :roftl: Does everybody give Mika things? I don't want to be weird and not

if that's the case. :naughty:

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Thank you for your compliments!!! :blush-anim-cl: I don't know what to give Mika at the show- if anything, this is all I could think of. But I don't really want to. :roftl: Does everybody give Mika things? I don't want to be weird and not

if that's the case. :naughty:

 

i don't noe if they do, but i think this would be a cool present! maybe you could paint one of his photos?..

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I just wrote this poem and it's basically my first one so let's not be harsh :naughty:

 

Hello there my linear tree

See my face,

Are you as happy as me?

For you see my love,

you were meant for me;

to guide my way

with your linear leaves

 

Through the ups and downs

you shield by pain;

Provide me shelter

in the pouring rain

But I know what is now

must come to an end

Your branches keep growing,

but they don't seem to end

 

Forever you will always remain in my heart

But please don't forget,

this is only the start

Please don't fear my friend,

for I will come back to see

My neverending friend,

My linear tree

 

 

Feedback would be nice :naughty:

 

 

God, I'm such a post whore :lmao:

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I just wrote this poem and it's basically my first one so let's not be harsh :naughty:

 

Hello there my linear tree

See my face,

Are you as happy as me?

For you see my love,

you were meant for me;

to guide my way

with your linear leaves

 

Through the ups and downs

you shield by pain;

Provide me shelter

in the pouring rain

But I know what is now

must come to an end

Your branches keep growing,

but they don't seem to end

 

Forever you will always remain in my heart

But please don't forget,

this is only the start

Please don't fear my friend,

for I will come back to see

My neverending friend,

My linear tree

 

My god, that's amazing. Did you know that? Seriously. Have you tried putting it to music?

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My god, that's amazing. Did you know that? Seriously. Have you tried putting it to music?

 

You really think so?:shocked: I'm gonna cry from joy:tears: haha

 

It wasn't meant to be a song so I don't think it would go well with music. I would need a proper verse and chorus.

 

 

And thanks:blush-anim-cl:

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