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Hey xBillyBrownx

 

 

Hows u???

I have added a few more stanzas to GK poem u wanna see them?

 

i'm good thanks! yes i love too :roftl:

gotta go but will be back on again later. I gotta go so out my stuff for uni!!! Bye guys xxx :wub2:

okay goodluck with that! but come back:thumb_yello:

 

hey hows everyone doing???:wink2:

good thanks:cool: and youu?

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hi guys!!!

 

I am back for a bit before my tea so as requested here is my rewrite of Grace Kelly! (if ppl dont know what I am on about look back a few pages I have explained there!)

 

The title is not final and I probably have a few touch ups to make to the poem but would love everyone's feedback on it!! So here it is...

 

Who do you think I am?

Who are you to state who I am,

or who I should be?

You try to make me conform to your ways,

to become someone I'm not!

 

I know who I am but you don't seem to understand this!

 

I am a unique person,

not a crowd follower.

Don't try to manipulate me,

because it won't work.

 

You think everyone will come in here,

and change themselves until you are happy,

Well I won't!

I know who I am and I'm sticking to it!!!

 

Nobody can label me

And that’s the way it’s going to be,

I won’t be your lump of clay

For you to model into your ideal image.

That’s not me!

 

I do things my way, on my terms,

Not on anybody else’s

And if you can’t accept that,

You know what you can do

 

You are no different from the rest

They all want to change me,

But they can’t, because I won’t let them,

And I won’t let you!

 

My identity is what makes me who I am

And without it, who am I?

 

 

So, what do u think? i am not sure on the ending yet, my other idea was to make it more general so that instead of My identity is what makes me who I am, it would be our identity makes us who we are. But I thought as this is quite a personal poem the ending should also be personal. But what do u guys think???

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maybe ... Mika spent all his money on setting up the stage so he could only shop at clares and primark for now ... poor lad

 

god, i haven't swapped my ticket for hammy-o yet

i don't know why his gig dates are always close to the jets'

 

last time i went to see the mystery jets' in bloomsbury ball room, it was great, then Mika cancelled the show !! im going to see the jets on 23/02, then Mika is on 25/02, how weird

 

Ooh, the photo girl is not here, bet she'd post alas agnes, but grandpa henry told me that the song is actually about a transexual, nothing special

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