ify Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 I thought about giving Mika some idea's for new songs (that is if he does read this xD) What do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 I thought about giving Mika some idea's for new songs (that is if he does read this xD)What do you guys think? That's a great idea! I write songs (just lyrics) myself, but I don't think I'd be good at his kind of songs. Still, wanna brain storm together? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 Sure but not right now as I have college in about 7 hours xD But I can give some words or themes Avalanche: you feel like you're on top of a mountain you scream and shout till suddenly the mountain moves and you're buried underneath piles of snow. I think that could create some interesting lyrics xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 Sure but not right now as I have college in about 7 hours xDBut I can give some words or themes Avalanche: you feel like you're on top of a mountain you scream and shout till suddenly the mountain moves and you're buried underneath piles of snow. I think that could create some interesting lyrics xD -=1 beat Continuing "avalanche": taking on too much than you can handle is what I did today. The I scream and shout-- so loud that the avalanche is here to stay and buried in memories that flash before me I scream and shout but you never come I cry your name and I sing my song so why don't you come the snow melts and I get up another avalanche of tears Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 -=1 beatContinuing "avalanche": taking on too much than you can handle is what I did today. The I scream and shout-- so loud that the avalanche is here to stay and buried in memories that flash before me I scream and shout but you never come I cry your name and I sing my song so why don't you come the snow melts and I get up another avalanche of tears Loving it already But maybe have, why don't you come and melt the snow that surrounds me suffocating every scream I make, every call for you as your love has the heat I need to free me from this avalanche? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 Loving it already But maybe have, why don't you come and melt the snow that surrounds me suffocating every scream I make, every call for you as your love has the heat I need to free me from this avalanche? You are a way better writer than me. Then again, your in college, I'm in elementary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 Nonsense! I may be in college but I wouldn't have come up with that sentance with out your original input Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 (edited) Avalanche: you feel likeyou'reon top of a mountain you scream and shouttillsuddenly the mountain moves and you're buried underneath piles of snow. taking on too much than you can handle is what I did today. I scream and shout-- so loud that that im buried in memories that flash before me suffocating me your love has the heat to melt this avalanche away from me I edited each post we made so it fit in the song and this is what we have so far. You like? Edited January 31, 2013 by NeonSprinkes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 Nonsense! I may be in college but I wouldn't have come up with that sentance with out your original input Thanks! My dad used to be in a band. He sings a lot so I get my inspiration from his career. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 Loving it already But maybe have, why don't you come and melt the snow that surrounds me suffocating every scream I make, every call for you as your love has the heat I need to free me from this avalanche? I quite like that as a chorus, but still needs a whole lot of work. Also I don't have a clue as to what I'm doing I'm just writing creatively, I have no musical training whatsoever and I'm studying journalism at college xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 Thanks! My dad used to be in a band. He sings a lot so I get my inspiration from his career. You seem quite full of idea's which is great for writing in general Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 I quite like that as a chorus, but still needs a whole lot of work.Also I don't have a clue as to what I'm doing I'm just writing creatively, I have no musical training whatsoever and I'm studying journalism at college xD I have musical experience in writing lyrics, I get bullied a lot and I have a hard life. I have lots of happy times too. I love music. So my love of music inspired this song that I wrote: Where have I heard that melody inside my head or or on the radio I know I know its the melody of my heart its the melody of my soul so turn the radio on and play that track lets kick back (Chorus) And go-oh-oh turn the radio on right now I wanna get back to being happy and so-oh-oh its time to make the right choice Sing it out loud lets go oh-oh lets go I t-t-turn on the radio hear our song and I know you called and I hear the phone ring.Its you hello how do you do? Lets hang (Chorus) Verse3 And if you get tired of the same old song on the radio you know I know change the Channel (Chorus) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 You seem quite full of idea's which is great for writing in general I have an a in writing class! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 Avalanche: you feel likeyou'reon top of a mountain you scream and shouttillsuddenly the mountain moves and you're buried underneath piles of snow. taking on too much than you can handle is what I did today. I scream and shout-- so loud that that im buried in memories that flash before me suffocating me your love has the heat to melt this avalanche away from me I edited each post we made so it fit in the song and this is what we have so far. You like? I do indeed!, also what about "You're the mountain I tried to take on but I slipped and fell, tumbling, falling hitting every rock on the way down whilst a white monster descended on me." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 you did better then me then in English xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 I do indeed!, also what about "You're the mountain I tried to take on but I slipped and fell, tumbling, falling hitting every rock on the way down whilst a white monster descended on me." I like every part about it except whilst a white monster decended on me. How about: Your the mountain I tried to take on but I slipped and fell hitting every rock on the way down I never knew I could go through that much for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 Verse1 you feel likeyou'reon top of a mountain you scream and shouttillsuddenly the mountain moves and you're buried underneath piles of snow. taking on too much than you can handle is what I did today. Chorus I scream and shout--so loud that that im buried in memories that flash before me suffocating me your love has the heat to melt this avalanche away from me Verse2 Your the mountain I tried to take on but I slipped and fell hitting every rock on the way down I never knew I could go through that much for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 I like every part about it except whilst a white monster decended on me. How about: Your the mountain I tried to take on but I slipped and fell hitting every rock on the way down I never knew I could go through that much for you. Hmm you're right about the "white monster" but I don't think "I never knew I could go through that much for you" could do it, as I'm imagining the mountain as the person that the climber falls in love with and the snow as a symbol of that love falling apart (as love is a slippery slope) and the "avalanche" as a symbol of love suffocating that person . If you know what I mean xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 (edited) Hmm you're right about the "white monster" but I don't think "I never knew I could go through that much for you" could do it, as I'm imagining the mountain as the person that the climber falls in love with and the snow as a symbol of that love falling apart (as love is a slippery slope) and the "avalanche" as a symbol of love suffocating that person. If you know what I mean xD Lets just leave it like that. Once we write more we might get an idea and we can edit it. Wanna see some of MY songs? I don't care if mika uses them*hinthint* also if the snow represents their love falling apart and hes covered with snow is he covered with love or broken love??? xD and my line says (to me) that: I would do anything for you, fall down a mountain, stand in an avalanche, I would about your name from the rooftops. Edited January 31, 2013 by NeonSprinkes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 Verse1 you feel likeyou'reon top of a mountain you scream and shouttillsuddenly the mountain moves and you're buried underneath piles of snow. taking on too much than you can handle is what I did today. Chorus I scream and shout--so loud that that im buried in memories that flash before me suffocating me your love has the heat to melt this avalanche away from me Verse2 Your the mountain I tried to take on but I slipped and fell hitting every rock on the way down I never knew I could go through that much for you I think a few changes to verse 1 could be made like, you feel like you're on top of a mountain "top" "and" you scream and shouttillsuddenly the mountain moves and you're buried "beneath" piles of snow. taking on too much than you can handle is what I did today. And maybe instead of taking on too much than you can handle is what I did today it could be "I took on you're love, but lost as the waves drew closer to me." perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 I think a few changes to verse 1 could be made like, you feel like you're on top of a mountain "top" "and" you scream and shouttillsuddenly the mountain moves and you're buried "beneath" piles of snow. taking on too much than you can handle is what I did today. And maybe instead of taking on too much than you can handle is what I did today it could be "I took on you're love, but lost as the waves drew closer to me." perhaps? Waves? What about snow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 Lets just leave it like that. Once we write more we might get an idea and we can edit it. Wanna see some of MY songs? I don't care if mika uses them*hinthint*also if the snow represents their love falling apart and hes covered with snow is he covered with love or broken love??? xD Sure and in this case it's more of broken love as they have "fallen" down the slippery slope and is on the ground unable to get back up. It's quite depressing now that I think about it xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeonSprinkes Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 Sure and in this case it's more of broken love as they have "fallen" down the slippery slope and is on the ground unable to get back up. It's quite depressing now that I think about it xD Ya... wanna hear/ see one of my songs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 Waves? What about snow? Waves of snow, in an avalanche the snow moves like waves of water down the mountain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ify Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 Ya... wanna hear/ see one of my songs? Sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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