Maca Posted March 26, 2013 Share Posted March 26, 2013 Hi Guys, I've not posted on this site in so long. I was asked to do a story for my English work, this is getting marked for like 20% of my official grade. I'm not the best at English nor do I enjoy the subject, but writing this story set me on a natural high for a while. The story is about how Mika came to saying my name on radio and my whole experience with the show I went. Lots and lots of it is made up, but most is of real experience. I went to the manchester show in Decemeber, 14th. Read the story here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/93xv30d257jwx2o/Success%20on%20the%20radio.pdf Enjoy and tell me any improvments or what you don't like or what you like etc. THANK U Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LaraMay Posted March 26, 2013 Share Posted March 26, 2013 Loved reading your story! Great work I absolutely adored the action dolls you threw onstage that night lol I was in the choir actually and so many strange things happened during that show which made it my favorite Mika show yet I had brought confetti and blow up instruments to stage but your action dolls were an absolute riot Loved them! Well done and congrats on getting your name mentioned on the radio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nas Posted March 26, 2013 Share Posted March 26, 2013 Hi Guys, I've not posted on this site in so long.I was asked to do a story for my English work, this is getting marked for like 20% of my official grade. I'm not the best at English nor do I enjoy the subject, but writing this story set me on a natural high for a while. The story is about how Mika came to saying my name on radio and my whole experience with the show I went. Lots and lots of it is made up, but most is of real experience. I went to the manchester show in Decemeber, 14th. Read the story here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/93xv30d257jwx2o/Success%20on%20the%20radio.pdf Enjoy and tell me any improvments or what you don't like or what you like etc. THANK U Hey there! Oh I def rmbr hearing ur name on the radio! Great story but u have quite a few grammatical mistakes. When do u have to submit it by? If you're interested I could suggest some edits for you... Good work though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maca Posted March 29, 2013 Author Share Posted March 29, 2013 I changed a lot of the parts that didn't make as much sense, I ended up getting an A on the story So happy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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