MFC Coffee House (poetry, art & stories)

[purplegrape]

This Idea was suggested by Lolliepop_girl in a thread where i posted some poetry. so, feel free to post and stories about/including mika or poetry about/including him. or just any poetry or stories you want.

 

now every thread i have even made has died within a week and i dont want this to interfier with the fan-fic thread cause this is anything at all, not just one subject.

 

if you want you can post art too. this can be a kind of coffee house (where poetry and stories and art is shared over coffee or such) for us mfcers. so how about we let one of my threads live for more than a day or 2?

 

i'll start with the poem i posted before, its still untitled so suggestions are wanted and see how many mika songs you can spot.

 

We both know

too much candy

is gonna rot your soul,

yet my sweet tooth

yerns for the taset

of you'r sugarcane lips

 

Now I'm trying to replace

a feeling without a name

so i smile and try to mean it

to let myself let go

but I'm left on a broken train

with nobody I know

 

Caught up in the reasons

for the stupid things i do,

I've got a dangerous obsession

as i sit for countless hours

wondering how much you miss me

when I'm not there

 

Then reality pummels me in the face

with the ice of your sightless eyes

when you look at me

my heart weeps

asthough I'm the only lonely one

 

Each time you utter her name

you fork out my daylight

and torture my soul

I'm intollerably blue

at the thought of leaving you

though I know

you've already abandoned me

 

I've never really been together

but i never meant to fall apart

now I've fallen in love with you

and I'm dreaming of what we might do

 

In my nightmares

you let me drown

now i realize

i must move on

 

I could be hurtful

but if anything should happen

I guess I'd wish you well

 

I won't act like a fool

cause you made me

I don't need a reason

not to care because

your love may be what i need,

but not your sympathy

 

 

wadda ya'll think??

please leave suggestions, i know theres messed up parts and i'd love for some help!

[purplegrape]

this is starting off well

[AKateisaKate]

I'll be finishing a drawing of Mika this weekend for a class, but I'm only posting it if it looks good/ like him at all.

[CordeliaMoon]

I posted some poetry a while ago. I was inspired by Over my shoulder and went through my stash to see what has a bit of Mika in it... and these were the result.

 

 

Backseat Odyssey

 

I travel all over the world

in the backseat of his car

 

Prisoner of shaded windowpanes

I look out and I stare in vain

 

Rolling fields and endless streets

an evergoing stretch of road ahead

 

Stop in the snow, wind or gail

I have no idea where we might be

 

Houses, trees and people too seem

to belong to another world but mine

 

Laying down and looking out, the sky

changes day by day

I've changed all about me, all you

might know and I've left my

true self many miles ago.

 

 

Lazy Rain

As you listen to the lazy rain outside

you wonder why, where

when, how much?

 

How will that turning point come?

 

You move about your house

and are drawn inside a

vision of a blue white kitchen

 

The falling rain, the pouring beach

As I walk outside I can taste

the flesh of the salt...

As I walk on...

 

The Torture of Dreams

 

You haunt my dreams

your soft voice lingers

I can still feel your arms

around me oh how I long for

you

 

And touch your fingertips

feel the heat flowing through

me

Empty inside without you

A dream that can never come

true

Your hair slips through my

fingers

A vision through the night

A sigh upon waking and

tears are cried to the

heavens

oh to have you with me

 

 

Maybe

 

Aren't you depressed

don't you feel the

amalgamated form of any

disease take over

your mind?

He stands there lost, confused

muttering in the streets

unseeing eyes glaze over

hand raises in a twitch

Feeling lost sound noise

loud alone

Many people get so alone

Tunes & Tones filling

his head

Maybe

[~Ana~]

purplegrape, i think i saw ten mika songs in your poem, am i right?? haha, it's really great, your poem.

CordeliaMoon, you are a wonderful writer!!, i like the the title of the first poem

"Backseat Odyssey" is Odyssey for the name of your van?, haha, i was just wondering...

 

I dont have great skills for anything, well not that i know, but i like taking pictures, drawing, and sometimes i write but when i'm really inspired...maybe i'll post some of that later on.

[armande]

No Way Out

 

Love, is to

Welcome pain.

 

Pain, is the

Result of love.

 

The more you care,

The more pain you await.

 

All good things

All come to an end.

 

In the end a couple of love equals

One pain left behind

 

In exchange for one thing,

So much can be avoided.

 

Without love there is no pain,

But lonely is so lonely.

 

i wrote that a while ago for school, and got 18/20 for it and an analysis i had to write for it. i'm not much of a poetry writer besides when i have to.

 

it seems a lot of us have been inspired by mika

[BonjourMika1990]

I wrote about someone I know

and about one of the best nights of my life

 

That empty stage would not know love before this night

when all were chanting his name.

Thumping hearts and clapping hands at once unite

For love of the one the lions could not tame.

 

She tries to remember her life before him and decides it doesn't matter.

In a moment her eyes would find him, the greatest sight ever to behold.

There he was and there she stood, a bond that no one dare shatter.

For never was there a moment as clear as this the revelation of a bravery so bold.

 

 

A command indeed he did make that all would love today.

Now it all made sense you see, the beauty of this epic tale.

For in a moment it would end and there would be no words left to say.

And so she clung to her memories as the glittering silhouette moved behind the veil.

 

The wish that sought refuge in her heart flew out from its cage

Searching for its creator on that empty empty stage.

[armande]

that is so beautiful bonjourmika!

[Lolliepop_girl]

I'll have something for you all later.

A poem about my character, Rose.

 

Gosh, MFCers have alot of talent.

You're all really good at writing, keep up the good work.

Mwah.

[sparkly1]

OoooOooo a poerty/arty thread thing, I can't do arty stu0ofs so I'll post a poemy. I did open a thread a long while ago but it dissapeared lol.

 

I like reading other peoples thoughts and feelings via poetry, nice work ppls

I am still half in the process of of doing a mika one, so I shall have to post this for now.

Shh…

 

Can u hear the silence?

Drawn by its echo

Echo…echo

Like butterfly girly giggles

That whisper secrets

Upon pink sugared paper; and

It’s enticing, inviting

Exciting, nail biting,

Within the cool brick

Walls inside the sunless

Tunnel of my insanity

Insanity…insanity.

Jeering while the scrap

Of intact mind clings

With bloodied talons

To the sides of this red

Brick upturned well,

And I’m falling

Falling…falling.

Shh…

Can you hear the silence?

 

©Vivienne B 29/4/2006

[Shaza!]

Ooh I like this thread! I hope Starbucks is served, I'll have a caramel machiato please!

 

Well my favourite poem happens to be verry long, "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" by T.S. Eliot, so I wont post it but it's here it's anyone is interested: http://www.cs.amherst.edu/ccm/prufrock.html

I also love Sylvia Plath's poetry.

 

I entered a poem I wrote into a national poetry competition when I was 9 and I won! haha I remember my school made such a big deal outta it , it was cool though

There's no way I'm posting it here though lol!

[kk448]

I'm gonna go for a haiku *ahem*

 

Mika's very hawt

I look at Mikagasmic

Pictures all day long.

 

[armande]

Ooh I like this thread! I hope Starbucks is served, I'll have a caramel machiato please!

 

Well my favourite poem happens to be verry long, "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" by T.S. Eliot, so I wont post it but it's here it's anyone is interested: http://www.cs.amherst.edu/ccm/prufrock.html

I also love Sylvia Plath's poetry.

 

I entered a poem I wrote into a national poetry competition when I was 9 and I won! haha I remember my school made such a big deal outta it , it was cool though

There's no way I'm posting it here though lol!

i love that poem too, we studied it in english this year, and also a bit of plath, i dont know what my favourite would have to be, i like the sick rose by william blake, depends what sort of a mood i am in though

[Shaza!]

i love that poem too, we studied it in english this year, and also a bit of plath, i dont know what my favourite would have to be, i like the sick rose by william blake, depends what sort of a mood i am in though

 

Yep we studied that poem in English too! everyone hated it cos it was so long but I loved it!! it's a great poem

yeah thats true a lot does depend on your mood too, i must look up that poem sick rose!

[Hannah]

I'm gonna go for a haiku *ahem*

 

Mika's very hawt

I look at Mikagasmic

Pictures all day long.

 

 

Wow. That's deep. I'm inspired.

 

 

[CordeliaMoon]

Thank you Ana!

 

And no that's not the name of a van!

[Sarah_loves_mika]

This thread is really cool!!!

 

Im not sure if i have a favourite poem, but i really like the one by William Wordsworth, you know the one that starts 'I wandered lonely as a cloud'....

 

[inhye812]

I'm not good at writing poem, also i can't do by english:blink:

but i have a favorite english poem!

"Stopping by Woods on a Snowny Evening" by Robert Frost:thumb_yello:

i don't know many english poems, and i think this is best of poem i know~~

and i think this fits in winter, isn't it？

[kk448]

Wow. That's deep. I'm inspired.

 

 

 

Yeah I know, thanks.

[purplegrape]

I posted some poetry a while ago. I was inspired by Over my shoulder and went through my stash to see what has a bit of Mika in it... and these were the result.

 

those were really good, i think the 3rd and 4th were my favourite.

 

 

purplegrape, i think i saw ten mika songs in your poem, am i right?? haha, it's really great, your poem.

 

i counted a bit more than 10 myself. i had a list, but i lost it. i used his unreleased songs too.

 

 

I wrote about someone I know

and about one of the best nights of my life

 

That empty stage would not know love before this night

when all were chanting his name.

Thumping hearts and clapping hands at once unite

For love of the one the lions could not tame.

 

She tries to remember her life before him and decides it doesn't matter.

In a moment her eyes would find him, the greatest sight ever to behold.

There he was and there she stood, a bond that no one dare shatter.

For never was there a moment as clear as this the revelation of a bravery so bold.

 

 

A command indeed he did make that all would love today.

Now it all made sense you see, the beauty of this epic tale.

For in a moment it would end and there would be no words left to say.

And so she clung to her memories as the glittering silhouette moved behind the veil.

 

The wish that sought refuge in her heart flew out from its cage

Searching for its creator on that empty empty stage.

 

WOW! that wasreally good, i love that:thumb_yello:

 

OoooOooo a poerty/arty thread thing, I can't do arty stu0ofs so I'll post a poemy. I did open a thread a long while ago but it dissapeared lol.

 

I like reading other peoples thoughts and feelings via poetry, nice work ppls

I am still half in the process of of doing a mika one, so I shall have to post this for now.

Shh…

 

Can u hear the silence?

Drawn by its echo

Echo…echo

Like butterfly girly giggles

That whisper secrets

Upon pink sugared paper; and

It’s enticing, inviting

Exciting, nail biting,

Within the cool brick

Walls inside the sunless

Tunnel of my insanity

Insanity…insanity.

Jeering while the scrap

Of intact mind clings

With bloodied talons

To the sides of this red

Brick upturned well,

And I’m falling

Falling…falling.

Shh…

Can you hear the silence?

 

©Vivienne B 29/4/2006

 

thats really pretty too. mfcers are sooo talented. maybe if we're lucky a talent scout will roam around mfc, lol

[purplegrape]

heres some stuff i drew, the quality is bad cause my scanner is broke so i had to take a pic.

 

original

 

drawing

 

 

original

 

drawing

[purplegrape]

couple more:

 

original

 

drawing

 

 

original

 

drawing

 

that last one was really hrad cause the pic i used was really small.

 

this is the one im working on now.

 

 

im also looking for a good pic of David Bowie to draw.

[Lolliepop_girl]

This Idea was suggested by Lolliepop_girl in a thread where i posted some poetry. so, feel free to post and stories about/including mika or poetry about/including him. or just any poetry or stories you want.

 

now every thread i have even made has died within a week and i dont want this to interfier with the fan-fic thread cause this is anything at all, not just one subject.

 

if you want you can post art too. this can be a kind of coffee house (where poetry and stories and art is shared over coffee or such) for us mfcers. so how about we let one of my threads live for more than a day or 2?

 

i'll start with the poem i posted before, its still untitled so suggestions are wanted and see how many mika songs you can spot.

 

We both know

too much candy

is gonna rot your soul,

yet my sweet tooth

yerns for the taset

of you'r sugarcane lips

 

Now I'm trying to replace

a feeling without a name

so i smile and try to mean it

to let myself let go

but I'm left on a broken train

with nobody I know

 

Caught up in the reasons

for the stupid things i do,

I've got a dangerous obsession

as i sit for countless hours

wondering how much you miss me

when I'm not there

 

Then reality pummels me in the face

with the ice of your sightless eyes

when you look at me

my heart weeps

asthough I'm the only lonely one

 

Each time you utter her name

you fork out my daylight

and torture my soul

I'm intollerably blue

at the thought of leaving you

though I know

you've already abandoned me

 

I've never really been together

but i never meant to fall apart

now I've fallen in love with you

and I'm dreaming of what we might do

 

In my nightmares

you let me drown

now i realize

i must move on

 

I could be hurtful

but if anything should happen

I guess I'd wish you well

 

I won't act like a fool

cause you made me

I don't need a reason

not to care because

your love may be what i need,

but not your sympathy

 

 

wadda ya'll think??

please leave suggestions, i know theres messed up parts and i'd love for some help!

Are there 14 songs quoted?

 

How about Love In Cartoon Motion?

[purplegrape]

Are there 14 songs quoted?

 

How about Love In Cartoon Motion?

 

THATS IT!

AHAHAHAHA!! I LOVE YOU!! THANK YOU!!

[Shaza!]

wow rocket your drawings are really great!

i must start drawing again, i used to a lot a few years ago and loved it but havent in ages now...

 

 

this is the one im working on now.

 

 

 

this picture is gorgeous