Emerald Posted June 17, 2008 Author Share Posted June 17, 2008 Ok, Daniella, this one's for you! D aniella, I don't know you, really... A fact I know though, is that you like N ames into poems. I thought I would write a poem with yours E ven though I don't know much about you! L et me tell you I like your texts! L oads of kisses for you my friend, and A great day I hope you'll have! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 :eek:oh,thank you Emerald! It's so sweeeeet U r the queen! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicfreak Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 my poem: hope you like it:bleh: Mr. Twinkle My love do i need to say anymore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted June 17, 2008 Author Share Posted June 17, 2008 :eek:oh,thank you Emerald! It's so sweeeeet U r the queen! You're welcome, my pleasure!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted June 17, 2008 Author Share Posted June 17, 2008 my poem: hope you like it:bleh: Mr. Twinkle My love do i need to say anymore? Yes, you need to: Mr Twinkle MYlove :roftl:lol nooooooo, simple things are the best ones! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 OK,this' 1's 4 u Emerald! Engraved in ur hart Mika is, Mope-nope and motley-yes,seems. Enigma flows through ur veins, Rock my dear,borrow his wings! Anti annoying,swiss which doesn't exist, Lovely French-make u special,at least. Deluge keep us with ur posts,please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted June 18, 2008 Author Share Posted June 18, 2008 OK,this' 1's 4 u Emerald! Engraved in ur hart Mika is, Mope-nope and motley-yes,seems. Enigma flows through ur veins, Rock my dear,borrow his wings! Anti annoying,swiss which doesn't exist, Lovely French-make u special,at least. Deluge keep us with ur posts,please! T H A N K Y O U ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 You're welcome, my pleasure!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted June 22, 2008 Author Share Posted June 22, 2008 Hi!!!! I have something new for you guys!! It's a song, or a poem, or whatever you like:wink2:I hope you get the point... If you don't I'll explain:roftl: ALIVE Have you been in this place, The space in between? Where your life is put in brackets, When anger, sorrow and regrets Are left aside. I have. But I've come back since. My life left behind, My life, and worries, and sins. I was more alive Then. Have you been in this world, The world where everything's possible? You're not yourself, but you're here. Things are senseless, yet they're clear In your mind. I have. But I've come back since. My life left behind, My life, and worries, and sins. I was more alive Then. I have tried to escape many times. Escape from selfishness, Escape from boredom, from time itself. I have failed. I'll always be back, Less and less alive. So I'll put my life in brackets. I'll be myself, but I'll not be here. I'll leave anger, sorrow and regrets, And I'll go there, where things are clear. My life left behind, I'll be more alive Then. Emilie Pellaton June 21st Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 mmmmmmmmmmmm.I'll think than i'll tell u do i understand:wink2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 Hi!!!! I have something new for you guys!! It's a song, or a poem, or whatever you like:wink2:I hope you get the point... If you don't I'll explain:roftl: ALIVE Have you been in this place, The space in between? Where your life is put in brackets, When anger, sorrow and regrets Are left aside. I have. But I've come back since. My life left behind, My life, and worries, and sins. I was more alive Then. Have you been in this world, The world where everything's possible? You're not yourself, but you're here. Things are senseless, yet they're clear In your mind. I have. But I've come back since. My life left behind, My life, and worries, and sins. I was more alive Then. I have tried to escape many times. Escape from selfishness, Escape from boredom, from time itself. I have failed. I'll always be back, Less and less alive. So I'll put my life in brackets. I'll be myself, but I'll not be here. I'll leave anger, sorrow and regrets, And I'll go there, where things are clear. My life left behind, I'll be more alive Then. Emilie Pellaton June 21th Ur poem is... beautiful!:wub2: I left without text!!!! (but i'd like to hear ur version(translation)?-bcs everyone has his own...ya know...We're all different and we think different and make conclusions in a different way...) How u get the inspiration???(Mika?only?or sth more??) CONGRAT!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted June 22, 2008 Author Share Posted June 22, 2008 :wub2:I'm glad you like it!! Well, when I wrote the first 'stanza', I thought of the way you are when you take drugs (I've never taken any, but I tried to imagine). I guess when you take drugs, you don't worry about anything. But it's a moment, and it never lasts, you always have to come back to reality and to face your problems. The third stanza (the world where everything's possible) is about dreams. When you dream, you can be someone else and you're never really yourself. But in the dream, it feels it's you (I don't know if that makes sense). When you wake up, you realise that your dream was completely absurd and senseless. But during the dream, things are clear and have sense to you. But as drug effects, dreams never last. So the speaker in the song/poem decides to kill him/herself to leave his/her senseless life. Because s/he feels more alive in those "fake moments" than in his/her real life. I dunno if I made myself clear lol. It's kinda hard to explain one's own stuff:wink2: As for inspiration, well, I don't know really.... I just comes like this.... It's often just before sleep, or just after. It's a complete mystery! Edit: What is your interpretation? I'm interested to know ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 What is your interpretation? I'm interested to know ^^ Well...I didn't know u thought on drugs and killing :shocked:o... But i like it...very!It's kind a scary:jawdrop: BUT I LIKE UR INTERPRETATION MORE!! Well i thought u were inspired by Mika and MFC and the real world-which we don't like:thumbdown: So... 1one is about-how u live not here(MFC&Mika's-unreal world) and not even in the real world-bcs u don't belong there and u escape from it everythime when u can. Than ur life is in the brackets bcs u r prisoner between possibility and wishes... 2one is -that u were there-u lived in that world(unreal world) and than u had no problems ect(I thought on that when u see Mika here-on MFC and hear some of his songs-everything bad disapear) 3one is - that u r here,u r not ur self-bcs u belong to him(Mika) to dreams,4 everyone things are pointless but 4 u they're clear,pure ect. 5one is-that u tried to escape from real world,that people from everything real and painful,but u always return bcs they 'slap' u with reality from which u can't escape... 6one-u'll keep live in the middle bcs u don't want to left that unreal world-so u'd rather live in 2...U'll keep being ur self and u'll live in ur own world,u'll left ur life(ex life) behind .... STH like this Very different,no? lol I'm always inspired by Mika lol what can i do.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaeryana Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 Hi!!!! I have something new for you guys!! It's a song, or a poem, or whatever you like:wink2:I hope you get the point... If you don't I'll explain:roftl: ALIVE Have you been in this place, The space in between? Where your life is put in brackets, When anger, sorrow and regrets Are left aside. I have. But I've come back since. My life left behind, My life, and worries, and sins. I was more alive Then. Have you been in this world, The world where everything's possible? You're not yourself, but you're here. Things are senseless, yet they're clear In your mind. I have. But I've come back since. My life left behind, My life, and worries, and sins. I was more alive Then. I have tried to escape many times. Escape from selfishness, Escape from boredom, from time itself. I have failed. I'll always be back, Less and less alive. So I'll put my life in brackets. I'll be myself, but I'll not be here. I'll leave anger, sorrow and regrets, And I'll go there, where things are clear. My life left behind, I'll be more alive Then. Emilie Pellaton June 21th woah,i never thought of drugs and suicide when i'm analyzing it my interpretation is more brief,and is more towards what lies beneath the happy ending lyrics.from what i can conclude,it's more to a story of one who has enjoyed a very fortunate life,and suddenly faith has grabbed everything away from him,leaving him nothing but dreams.so he yearned for a better tomorrow,and wished to remain in his dreams,where he can be himself and avoid the brutal real-world.well,that's what i think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted June 22, 2008 Author Share Posted June 22, 2008 Well...I didn't know u thought on drugs and killing :shocked:o... But i like it...very!It's kind a scary:jawdrop: BUT I LIKE UR INTERPRETATION MORE!! Well i thought u were inspired by Mika and MFC and the real world-which we don't like:thumbdown: So... 1one is about-how u live not here(MFC&Mika's-unreal world) and not even in the real world-bcs u don't belong there and u escape from it everythime when u can. Than ur life is in the brackets bcs u r prisoner between possibility and wishes... 2one is -that u were there-u lived in that world(unreal world) and than u had no problems ect(I thought on that when u see Mika here-on MFC and hear some of his songs-everything bad disapear) 3one is - that u r here,u r not ur self-bcs u belong to him(Mika) to dreams,4 everyone things are pointless but 4 u they're clear,pure ect. 5one is-that u tried to escape from real world,that people from everything real and painful,but u always return bcs they 'slap' u with reality from which u can't escape... 6one-u'll keep live in the middle bcs u don't want to left that unreal world-so u'd rather live in 2...U'll keep being ur self and u'll live in ur own world,u'll left ur life(ex life) behind .... STH like this Very different,no? lol I'm always inspired by Mika lol what can i do.... Wow, that's an interesting and optimistic (more than mine lol) interpretation!! I'm happy to see that my poem/song/whatever is not that obvious:naughty: Btw, it's not because my text talks about drugs and suicide that I'm into it... On the contrary, I'm a really happy person, I laugh all the time and I'll never take drugs, that's a bet:wink2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted June 22, 2008 Author Share Posted June 22, 2008 woah,i never thought of drugs and suicide when i'm analyzing it my interpretation is more brief,and is more towards what lies beneath the happy ending lyrics.from what i can conclude,it's more to a story of one who has enjoyed a very fortunate life,and suddenly faith has grabbed everything away from him,leaving him nothing but dreams.so he yearned for a better tomorrow,and wished to remain in his dreams,where he can be himself and avoid the brutal real-world.well,that's what i think Well, it's funny that you thought the last stanza was the 'happy ending', because when I wrote it, I thought it more like the guy will commit suicide and be free, leave his life and anger behind. But your interpretation is really interesting as well! Wow, you know, I like your interpretations!!!:wub2:Ha ha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 I laugh all the time and I'll never take drugs, that's a bet:wink2: Yeah,I almost can SEE that:naughty: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaeryana Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 Well, it's funny that you thought the last stanza was the 'happy ending', because when I wrote it, I thought it more like the guy will commit suicide and be free, leave his life and anger behind. But your interpretation is really interesting as well! Wow, you know, I like your interpretations!!!:wub2:Ha ha haha,thanks! i'm just a literature geek is all it's awesome that there are many diff interpretations of your poem.write more and let me at em!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted June 22, 2008 Author Share Posted June 22, 2008 haha,thanks! i'm just a literature geek is all it's awesome that there are many diff interpretations of your poem.write more and let me at em!! Yeah!! I'm surprised, cause I thought that the suicide part was obvious! Well, apparently it's not:wink2: Ok, if you feel like analysing texts, you can still work on the ones I posted first haha!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted July 7, 2008 Author Share Posted July 7, 2008 Hey guys!! I guess you've all seen that we can now sign up to participate in the 2008 yearbook project and that there is a "Poetry" section! I have registered of course, and I'm really excited about it! Do you guys realise that Mika will read my stuff, like, for sure?? It feels great, really, I can't stop thinking about it! I don't know if some of you have signed up or will, but you should... Ok, I just wanted to share my excitement!! Emerald xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fmbm Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Hey guys!! I guess you've all seen that we can now sign up to participate in the 2008 yearbook project and that there is a "Poetry" section! I have registered of course, and I'm really excited about it! Do you guys realise that Mika will read my stuff, like, for sure?? It feels great, really, I can't stop thinking about it! I don't know if some of you have signed up or will, but you should... Ok, I just wanted to share my excitement!! Emerald xoxo Yeah, it's a great feeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jennifer_Noble Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 Yeah!! I'm surprised, cause I thought that the suicide part was obvious! Well, apparently it's not:wink2: yea I thought of suicide at first as well but at second thought I was like...nah, that would be way too dramatic, my thoughts are too dark. nice to know i was right but... ehm your poem is beautiful I wish I could write like that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted August 2, 2008 Author Share Posted August 2, 2008 yea I thought of suicide at first as well but at second thought I was like...nah, that would be way too dramatic, my thoughts are too dark. nice to know i was right but... ehm your poem is beautiful I wish I could write like that! Yippee, the thread is alive again! haha:punk: I'm glad you like my poem! Yeah, I know it's a bit dark... But dark thoughts are easier to express than happy feelings, for me at least! If you happen to write something, anything, just post it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 Hey guys!! I guess you've all seen that we can now sign up to participate in the 2008 yearbook project and that there is a "Poetry" section! I have registered of course, and I'm really excited about it! Do you guys realise that Mika will read my stuff, like, for sure??:mf_lustslo It feels great, really, I can't stop thinking about it!:wub2 I don't know if some of you have signed up or will, but you should... Ok, I just wanted to share my excitement!! Emerald xoxo Yeah Emilie:wub2:I was so excited...Think that was great idea...I even sing up to give my autograph to mika with VOLIM TE-love u in my language...:blink:Aw...Can-t believe that wasn-t so excited when he received our photo album...sth's wrong with me... Which song u have sent??? P.S. 4 a loooooooooong time i haven't written sth*slap* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted August 2, 2008 Author Share Posted August 2, 2008 Yeah Emilie:wub2:I was so excited...Think that was great idea...I even sing up to give my autograph to mika with VOLIM TE-love u in my language...:blink:Aw...Can-t believe that wasn-t so excited when he received our photo album...sth's wrong with me... Which song u have sent??? P.S. 4 a loooooooooong time i haven't written sth*slap* Hi!!! The autographs were MY idea!! I'm really excited too!!!! I've sent "The Pyramid of the Magician", "The Rainbow", "Untitled" and "Alive". I might sent another one, if the inspiration comes!! Which one/s have you sent? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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