Creative writing about/inspired by MIKA!!

[Daniella92]

Well, I do it too, cause I'm reaaaaaaaally curious:naughty:

 

I never do that:boxed:

[Emerald]

I never do that:boxed:

 

:naughty:You're pure:rolls_eyes:

[Daniella92]

:naughty:You're pure:rolls_eyes:

 

:naughty: h hm,i mean i am:angel_not:

[FREDDIESDOUBLE]

Morrissey anyone?

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1IbJQ4YAPRo

[Emerald]

h hm,i mean i am:angel_not:

 

Course you are:naughty:

Morrissey anyone?

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1IbJQ4YAPRo

Nice vid, but... What has it to do in this thread?

 

Hi, English teacher:naughty:

[Tiff]

I don't know if anyone's interested in them or if this is the right place to post it (since I got inspired by his songs) but I'm gonna post them anyway.

I wrote 2 poems. One while listening to Erase and the other while I was listening to Any Other World. I like writing poetry but I completely suck at it

 

I ran

 

I hid my feelings

Afraid of getting hurt

They didn’t mind to fade away

But to be heard

 

A mask was my face

Embraced by this invisible wall

Not allowing it to open

For I was afraid to fall

 

But then without a sign

My mask got torn apart

My wall smashed to pieces

Goodbye, protection of my heart

 

Erase

 

Many mistakes were left unspoken

Pain buried deep in our souls

And a wish that everything could go back

to the way they were

 

Reversing time is no option

Although we craved for it to be one

But now the only choice left to choose

Is to walk forward without looking back

 

And I tried to forget the feelings we felt

And I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong

But sometimes trying is just not good enough

To erase the moments we shared

 

A replacement for me has found a way

Into the arms that were supposed to be my hiding place

A different face has rewritten mine

Then why do your eyes still keep searching for me?

 

Time has run out

There’s no space for the thing once called us

So maybe it’s better to put an end to the pain

And put my finger on the trigger

 

Hope there are not that many mistakes in it since I'm not a native English speaker and I normally speak/write in Dutch ...

[Emerald]

I don't know if anyone's interested in them or if this is the right place to post it (since I got inspired by his songs) but I'm gonna post them anyway.

I wrote 2 poems. One while listening to Erase and the other while I was listening to Any Other World. I like writing poetry but I completely suck at it

 

I ran

 

I hid my feelings

Afraid of getting hurt

They didn’t mind to fade away

But to be heard

 

A mask was my face

Embraced by this invisible wall

Not allowing it to open

For I was afraid to fall

 

But then without a sign

My mask got torn apart

My wall smashed to pieces

Goodbye, protection of my heart

 

Erase

 

Many mistakes were left unspoken

Pain buried deep in our souls

And a wish that everything could go back

to the way they were

 

Reversing time is no option

Although we craved for it to be one

But now the only choice left to choose

Is to walk forward without looking back

 

And I tried to forget the feelings we felt

And I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong

But sometimes trying is just not good enough

To erase the moments we shared

 

A replacement for me has found a way

Into the arms that were supposed to be my hiding place

A different face has rewritten mine

Then why do your eyes still keep searching for me?

 

Time has run out

There’s no space for the thing once called us

So maybe it’s better to put an end to the pain

And put my finger on the trigger

 

Hope there are not that many mistakes in it since I'm not a native English speaker and I normally speak/write in Dutch ...

Reaaaaaaaaaaaally nice!!!! Why do you say you suck at it? It's not true!!!

 

And yeah, you can post whatever you like in here lol. It was creative writing about Mika, but it doesn't matter. Share what you want!!!

 

Congrats!!

[Tiff]

Reaaaaaaaaaaaally nice!!!! Why do you say you suck at it? It's not true!!!

 

And yeah, you can post whatever you like in here lol. It was creative writing about Mika, but it doesn't matter. Share what you want!!!

 

Congrats!!

 

Thanks

You made me blush!

I'm never satisfied with the things I do ... It's because I'm a perfectionist when it comes to myself. It's a bad habit.

 

I think I might send these in for the yearbook ...

[Daniella92]

I don't know if anyone's interested in them or if this is the right place to post it (since I got inspired by his songs) but I'm gonna post them anyway.

I wrote 2 poems. One while listening to Erase and the other while I was listening to Any Other World. I like writing poetry but I completely suck at it

 

I ran

 

I hid my feelings

Afraid of getting hurt

They didn’t mind to fade away

But to be heard

 

A mask was my face

Embraced by this invisible wall

Not allowing it to open

For I was afraid to fall

 

But then without a sign

My mask got torn apart

My wall smashed to pieces

Goodbye, protection of my heart

 

Erase

 

Many mistakes were left unspoken

Pain buried deep in our souls

And a wish that everything could go back

to the way they were

 

Reversing time is no option

Although we craved for it to be one

But now the only choice left to choose

Is to walk forward without looking back

 

And I tried to forget the feelings we felt

And I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong

But sometimes trying is just not good enough

To erase the moments we shared

 

A replacement for me has found a way

Into the arms that were supposed to be my hiding place

A different face has rewritten mine

Then why do your eyes still keep searching for me?

 

Time has run out

There’s no space for the thing once called us

So maybe it’s better to put an end to the pain

And put my finger on the trigger

 

Hope there are not that many mistakes in it since I'm not a native English speaker and I normally speak/write in Dutch ...

 

Very very :thumb_yello:

 

Nice job Tiff:wink2:

[Emerald]

Thanks

You made me blush!

I'm never satisfied with the things I do ... It's because I'm a perfectionist when it comes to myself. It's a bad habit.

 

I think I might send these in for the yearbook ...

You're welcome!!

 

I think it's good to be a perfectionist - I am kind of one, too. You're exacting, that all, I think it's a quality!

 

Yeah, send it, good idea!!

 

I have sent some of mine already:bleh:Hope he'll like them...

[Daniella92]

 

 

No Meeks in that vid...huh

[Emerald]

 

 

No Meeks in that vid...huh

Yeah... I wonder why he posted it. Maybe he desperately looks for someone to talk about this band/singer (I don't know them...)

[Tiff]

Nice job Tiff

 

Thanks!

 

You're welcome!!

 

I think it's good to be a perfectionist - I am kind of one, too. You're exacting, that all, I think it's a quality!

 

Yeah, send it, good idea!!

 

I have sent some of mine already:bleh:Hope he'll like them

 

Yes, let's hope!

It would be so sad if he wouldn't like something you worked on and is actually personal too and on top made it especially for him!

[Emerald]

Thanks!

 

 

 

Yes, let's hope!

It would be so sad if he wouldn't like something you worked on and is actually personal too and on top made it especially for him!

Yeah... But I'm sure he'll like all of them:punk:Anyway, I don't think he will personally tell us how he found our texts, so... Let's pretend he'll like them:naughty:

[sienna]

I don't know if anyone's interested in them or if this is the right place to post it (since I got inspired by his songs) but I'm gonna post them anyway.

I wrote 2 poems. One while listening to Erase and the other while I was listening to Any Other World. I like writing poetry but I completely suck at it

 

 

 

Erase

 

Many mistakes were left unspoken

Pain buried deep in our souls

And a wish that everything could go back

to the way they were

 

Reversing time is no option

Although we craved for it to be one

But now the only choice left to choose

Is to walk forward without looking back

 

And I tried to forget the feelings we felt

And I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong

But sometimes trying is just not good enough

To erase the moments we shared

 

A replacement for me has found a way

Into the arms that were supposed to be my hiding place

A different face has rewritten mine

Then why do your eyes still keep searching for me?

 

Time has run out

There’s no space for the thing once called us

So maybe it’s better to put an end to the pain

And put my finger on the trigger

 

Hope there are not that many mistakes in it since I'm not a native English speaker and I normally speak/write in Dutch ...

 

I know how you feel about the language issue, it's not easy.

Sometimes it's hard to understand and get the full meaning especially in poetry, but you have done a great job with Erase imo!

 

Mika's Erase is one of my favourites, I know some call it too easy, a sell out, but to me it is about:"One of the stupid things you do when you let your emotions take charge of your common sense!":boxed:

 

I really love both the lyrics and the way he sings that song!

And to read your interpretation was the" icing of the cake!":wub2:

 

Thanks Tiff!

[musicfreak]

I don't know if anyone's interested in them or if this is the right place to post it (since I got inspired by his songs) but I'm gonna post them anyway.

I wrote 2 poems. One while listening to Erase and the other while I was listening to Any Other World. I like writing poetry but I completely suck at it

 

I ran

 

I hid my feelings

Afraid of getting hurt

They didn’t mind to fade away

But to be heard

 

A mask was my face

Embraced by this invisible wall

Not allowing it to open

For I was afraid to fall

 

But then without a sign

My mask got torn apart

My wall smashed to pieces

Goodbye, protection of my heart

 

Erase

 

Many mistakes were left unspoken

Pain buried deep in our souls

And a wish that everything could go back

to the way they were

 

Reversing time is no option

Although we craved for it to be one

But now the only choice left to choose

Is to walk forward without looking back

 

And I tried to forget the feelings we felt

And I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong

But sometimes trying is just not good enough

To erase the moments we shared

 

A replacement for me has found a way

Into the arms that were supposed to be my hiding place

A different face has rewritten mine

Then why do your eyes still keep searching for me?

 

Time has run out

There’s no space for the thing once called us

So maybe it’s better to put an end to the pain

And put my finger on the trigger

 

Hope there are not that many mistakes in it since I'm not a native English speaker and I normally speak/write in Dutch ...

 

i love these so much:wub2: and it's in perfect English nothing to worry:bleh:

i really hope you post more poems they're really nice:wink2:

[purplegrape]

heres one i wrote attempting to use a lyric from every mika song. i think i got most of them.

and a couple lyrics from a song friom the movie Labyrinth.

its pretty easy to tell what its about, and if you knew me than its extremely obvious who its about.

the funny thing is, i lethim read it and he had no idea, hahahaha

 

anyway:

 

Love In Cartoon Motion

 

We both know

too much candy

is gonna rot your soul,

yet my sweet tooth yearns

for the taste

of your sugarcane lips

 

 

Now I’m trying to replace

a feeling without a name

so I smile

and try to mean it,

to let myself let go

but I’m left on a broken train

with nobody I know

 

 

Caught up in the reasons

for the stupid things Ido

I’ve got a dangerous obsession

and it’s focused on you

wondering how much you love me

how much you care

how much you miss me

when I’m not there

 

 

But reality abuses me

with the piercing ice

of your sightless eyes

asthough I’m the only lonely one,

so I live without your sunlight

and love without your heartbeat

 

 

Each time her name caresses your lips

you fork out my daylight

and torture my

I’m intollerably blue

at the thought of leaving you

though I know

you’ve already abandoned me

 

 

I’ve never reall been together

but I’ve never meant to fall apart

I’ve fallen in love with you

and I’m dreaming of what we might do

cause I’ll paint you mornings of gold

and spin you Valentine evenings

 

 

I realize I must move on

I could be hurtful

but if anything should happen

I guess I’d wish you well

 

 

I won’t act like a fool

cause you made me

and I won’t be the clown

that you made me

your love may be what I need

but not your sympathy.

 

~♥~

 

amber

[musicfreak]

heres one i wrote attempting to use a lyric from every mika song. i think i got most of them.

and a couple lyrics from a song friom the movie Labyrinth.

its pretty easy to tell what its about, and if you knew me than its extremely obvious who its about.

the funny thing is, i lethim read it and he had no idea, hahahaha

 

anyway:

 

Love In Cartoon Motion

 

We both know

too much candy

is gonna rot your soul,

yet my sweet tooth yearns

for the taste

of your sugarcane lips

 

 

Now I’m trying to replace

a feeling without a name

so I smile

and try to mean it,

to let myself let go

but I’m left on a broken train

with nobody I know

 

 

Caught up in the reasons

for the stupid things Ido

I’ve got a dangerous obsession

and it’s focused on you

wondering how much you love me

how much you care

how much you miss me

when I’m not there

 

 

But reality abuses me

with the piercing ice

of your sightless eyes

asthough I’m the only lonely one,

so I live without your sunlight

and love without your heartbeat

 

 

Each time her name caresses your lips

you fork out my daylight

and torture my

I’m intollerably blue

at the thought of leaving you

though I know

you’ve already abandoned me

 

 

I’ve never reall been together

but I’ve never meant to fall apart

I’ve fallen in love with you

and I’m dreaming of what we might do

cause I’ll paint you mornings of gold

and spin you Valentine evenings

 

 

I realize I must move on

I could be hurtful

but if anything should happen

I guess I’d wish you well

 

 

I won’t act like a fool

cause you made me

and I won’t be the clown

that you made me

your love may be what I need

but not your sympathy.

 

~♥~

 

amber

 

 

awww man that's really AWSOME! i love how you connected the lyrics from lots of different song:punk:....Labryinth was some movie.....

 

 

hey Floridian! haha it's okay i don't like it much here either:naughty:what part are u from?

[purplegrape]

awww man that's really AWSOME! i love how you connected the lyrics from lots of different song:punk:....Labryinth was some movie.....

 

 

hey Floridian! haha it's okay i don't like it much here either:naughty:what part are u from?

 

it was some movie. my fav ever in fact!!

David Bowie was so hot in that!

 

a little nothing-to-do town called holiday. just above tarpon springs.

do you know where that is?

where are you?

[musicfreak]

it was some movie. my fav ever in fact!!

David Bowie was so hot in that!

 

a little nothing-to-do town called holiday. just above tarpon springs.

do you know where that is?

where are you?

 

 

oh i know where that is...well Tarpon Springs anyway....i went there for a band competition.....[we nicknamed it Tampon Springs:roftl:]

[Emerald]

heres one i wrote attempting to use a lyric from every mika song. i think i got most of them.

and a couple lyrics from a song friom the movie Labyrinth.

its pretty easy to tell what its about, and if you knew me than its extremely obvious who its about.

the funny thing is, i lethim read it and he had no idea, hahahaha

 

anyway:

 

Love In Cartoon Motion

 

We both know

too much candy

is gonna rot your soul,

yet my sweet tooth yearns

for the taste

of your sugarcane lips

 

 

Now I’m trying to replace

a feeling without a name

so I smile

and try to mean it,

to let myself let go

but I’m left on a broken train

with nobody I know

 

 

Caught up in the reasons

for the stupid things Ido

I’ve got a dangerous obsession

and it’s focused on you

wondering how much you love me

how much you care

how much you miss me

when I’m not there

 

 

But reality abuses me

with the piercing ice

of your sightless eyes

asthough I’m the only lonely one,

so I live without your sunlight

and love without your heartbeat

 

 

Each time her name caresses your lips

you fork out my daylight

and torture my

I’m intollerably blue

at the thought of leaving you

though I know

you’ve already abandoned me

 

 

I’ve never reall been together

but I’ve never meant to fall apart

I’ve fallen in love with you

and I’m dreaming of what we might do

cause I’ll paint you mornings of gold

and spin you Valentine evenings

 

 

I realize I must move on

I could be hurtful

but if anything should happen

I guess I’d wish you well

 

 

I won’t act like a fool

cause you made me

and I won’t be the clown

that you made me

your love may be what I need

but not your sympathy.

 

~♥~

 

amber

 

Oh! This one's really COOL!!!

 

Why is it just a pain to live in Florida?

[Daniella92]

Emili u r all the day here

[Emerald]

Emili u r all the day here

 

He he, you too darling:naughty:

 

It's because I won't be here much next week:thumbdown:

 

And I loooooooooove being here, I'm addicted, for real:drool:

[Tiff]

Yeah... But I'm sure he'll like all of them. Anyway, I don't think he will personally tell us how he found our texts, so... Let's pretend he'll like them:naughty:

 

 

I know how you feel about the language issue, it's not easy.

Sometimes it's hard to understand and get the full meaning especially in poetry, but you have done a great job with Erase imo!

 

Mika's Erase is one of my favourites, I know some call it too easy, a sell out, but to me it is about:"One of the stupid things you do when you let your emotions take charge of your common sense!":boxed:

 

I really love both the lyrics and the way he sings that song!

And to read your interpretation was the" icing of the cake!":wub2:

 

Thanks Tiff!

 

Thank you

I really love erase too ... And I don't mind if people say it's simple. It's a beautiful song.

 

i love these so much:wub2: and it's in perfect English nothing to worry

i really hope you post more poems they're really nice

 

Thanks! I'm glad I didn't write mistakes ...

[Daniella92]

He he, you too darling:naughty:

 

It's because I won't be here much next week:thumbdown:

 

And I loooooooooove being here, I'm addicted, for real:drool:

 

Well me too,seems:droll:

It's just...huh...Full of happenings:naughty:

 

What did ya say bout mfc yearbook 2008???That u'll buy it?