Daniella92 Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 Well, I do it too, cause I'm reaaaaaaaally curious:naughty: I never do that:boxed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted August 2, 2008 Author Share Posted August 2, 2008 I never do that:boxed: :naughty:You're pure:rolls_eyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 :naughty:You're pure:rolls_eyes: :naughty: h hm,i mean i am:angel_not: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FREDDIESDOUBLE Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 Morrissey anyone? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1IbJQ4YAPRo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted August 2, 2008 Author Share Posted August 2, 2008 h hm,i mean i am:angel_not: Course you are:naughty: Morrissey anyone? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1IbJQ4YAPRo Nice vid, but... What has it to do in this thread? Hi, English teacher:naughty: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiff Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 I don't know if anyone's interested in them or if this is the right place to post it (since I got inspired by his songs) but I'm gonna post them anyway. I wrote 2 poems. One while listening to Erase and the other while I was listening to Any Other World. I like writing poetry but I completely suck at it I ran I hid my feelings Afraid of getting hurt They didn’t mind to fade away But to be heard A mask was my face Embraced by this invisible wall Not allowing it to open For I was afraid to fall But then without a sign My mask got torn apart My wall smashed to pieces Goodbye, protection of my heart Erase Many mistakes were left unspoken Pain buried deep in our souls And a wish that everything could go back to the way they were Reversing time is no option Although we craved for it to be one But now the only choice left to choose Is to walk forward without looking back And I tried to forget the feelings we felt And I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong But sometimes trying is just not good enough To erase the moments we shared A replacement for me has found a way Into the arms that were supposed to be my hiding place A different face has rewritten mine Then why do your eyes still keep searching for me? Time has run out There’s no space for the thing once called us So maybe it’s better to put an end to the pain And put my finger on the trigger Hope there are not that many mistakes in it since I'm not a native English speaker and I normally speak/write in Dutch ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted August 2, 2008 Author Share Posted August 2, 2008 I don't know if anyone's interested in them or if this is the right place to post it (since I got inspired by his songs) but I'm gonna post them anyway. I wrote 2 poems. One while listening to Erase and the other while I was listening to Any Other World. I like writing poetry but I completely suck at it I ran I hid my feelings Afraid of getting hurt They didn’t mind to fade away But to be heard A mask was my face Embraced by this invisible wall Not allowing it to open For I was afraid to fall But then without a sign My mask got torn apart My wall smashed to pieces Goodbye, protection of my heart Erase Many mistakes were left unspoken Pain buried deep in our souls And a wish that everything could go back to the way they were Reversing time is no option Although we craved for it to be one But now the only choice left to choose Is to walk forward without looking back And I tried to forget the feelings we felt And I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong But sometimes trying is just not good enough To erase the moments we shared A replacement for me has found a way Into the arms that were supposed to be my hiding place A different face has rewritten mine Then why do your eyes still keep searching for me? Time has run out There’s no space for the thing once called us So maybe it’s better to put an end to the pain And put my finger on the trigger Hope there are not that many mistakes in it since I'm not a native English speaker and I normally speak/write in Dutch ... Reaaaaaaaaaaaally nice!!!! Why do you say you suck at it? It's not true!!! And yeah, you can post whatever you like in here lol. It was creative writing about Mika, but it doesn't matter. Share what you want!!! Congrats!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiff Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 Reaaaaaaaaaaaally nice!!!! Why do you say you suck at it? It's not true!!! And yeah, you can post whatever you like in here lol. It was creative writing about Mika, but it doesn't matter. Share what you want!!! Congrats!! Thanks You made me blush! I'm never satisfied with the things I do ... It's because I'm a perfectionist when it comes to myself. It's a bad habit. I think I might send these in for the yearbook ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 I don't know if anyone's interested in them or if this is the right place to post it (since I got inspired by his songs) but I'm gonna post them anyway. I wrote 2 poems. One while listening to Erase and the other while I was listening to Any Other World. I like writing poetry but I completely suck at it I ran I hid my feelings Afraid of getting hurt They didn’t mind to fade away But to be heard A mask was my face Embraced by this invisible wall Not allowing it to open For I was afraid to fall But then without a sign My mask got torn apart My wall smashed to pieces Goodbye, protection of my heart Erase Many mistakes were left unspoken Pain buried deep in our souls And a wish that everything could go back to the way they were Reversing time is no option Although we craved for it to be one But now the only choice left to choose Is to walk forward without looking back And I tried to forget the feelings we felt And I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong But sometimes trying is just not good enough To erase the moments we shared A replacement for me has found a way Into the arms that were supposed to be my hiding place A different face has rewritten mine Then why do your eyes still keep searching for me? Time has run out There’s no space for the thing once called us So maybe it’s better to put an end to the pain And put my finger on the trigger Hope there are not that many mistakes in it since I'm not a native English speaker and I normally speak/write in Dutch ... Very very :thumb_yello: Nice job Tiff:wink2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted August 2, 2008 Author Share Posted August 2, 2008 Thanks You made me blush! I'm never satisfied with the things I do ... It's because I'm a perfectionist when it comes to myself. It's a bad habit. I think I might send these in for the yearbook ... You're welcome!! I think it's good to be a perfectionist - I am kind of one, too. You're exacting, that all, I think it's a quality! Yeah, send it, good idea!! I have sent some of mine already:bleh:Hope he'll like them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 No Meeks in that vid...huh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted August 2, 2008 Author Share Posted August 2, 2008 No Meeks in that vid...huh Yeah... I wonder why he posted it. Maybe he desperately looks for someone to talk about this band/singer (I don't know them...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiff Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 Nice job Tiff Thanks! You're welcome!! I think it's good to be a perfectionist - I am kind of one, too. You're exacting, that all, I think it's a quality! Yeah, send it, good idea!! I have sent some of mine already:bleh:Hope he'll like them Yes, let's hope! It would be so sad if he wouldn't like something you worked on and is actually personal too and on top made it especially for him! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted August 2, 2008 Author Share Posted August 2, 2008 Thanks! Yes, let's hope! It would be so sad if he wouldn't like something you worked on and is actually personal too and on top made it especially for him! Yeah... But I'm sure he'll like all of them:punk:Anyway, I don't think he will personally tell us how he found our texts, so... Let's pretend he'll like them:naughty: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sienna Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 I don't know if anyone's interested in them or if this is the right place to post it (since I got inspired by his songs) but I'm gonna post them anyway. I wrote 2 poems. One while listening to Erase and the other while I was listening to Any Other World. I like writing poetry but I completely suck at it Erase Many mistakes were left unspoken Pain buried deep in our souls And a wish that everything could go back to the way they were Reversing time is no option Although we craved for it to be one But now the only choice left to choose Is to walk forward without looking back And I tried to forget the feelings we felt And I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong But sometimes trying is just not good enough To erase the moments we shared A replacement for me has found a way Into the arms that were supposed to be my hiding place A different face has rewritten mine Then why do your eyes still keep searching for me? Time has run out There’s no space for the thing once called us So maybe it’s better to put an end to the pain And put my finger on the trigger Hope there are not that many mistakes in it since I'm not a native English speaker and I normally speak/write in Dutch ... I know how you feel about the language issue, it's not easy. Sometimes it's hard to understand and get the full meaning especially in poetry, but you have done a great job with Erase imo! Mika's Erase is one of my favourites, I know some call it too easy, a sell out, but to me it is about:"One of the stupid things you do when you let your emotions take charge of your common sense!":boxed: I really love both the lyrics and the way he sings that song! And to read your interpretation was the" icing of the cake!":wub2: Thanks Tiff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicfreak Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 I don't know if anyone's interested in them or if this is the right place to post it (since I got inspired by his songs) but I'm gonna post them anyway. I wrote 2 poems. One while listening to Erase and the other while I was listening to Any Other World. I like writing poetry but I completely suck at it I ran I hid my feelings Afraid of getting hurt They didn’t mind to fade away But to be heard A mask was my face Embraced by this invisible wall Not allowing it to open For I was afraid to fall But then without a sign My mask got torn apart My wall smashed to pieces Goodbye, protection of my heart Erase Many mistakes were left unspoken Pain buried deep in our souls And a wish that everything could go back to the way they were Reversing time is no option Although we craved for it to be one But now the only choice left to choose Is to walk forward without looking back And I tried to forget the feelings we felt And I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong But sometimes trying is just not good enough To erase the moments we shared A replacement for me has found a way Into the arms that were supposed to be my hiding place A different face has rewritten mine Then why do your eyes still keep searching for me? Time has run out There’s no space for the thing once called us So maybe it’s better to put an end to the pain And put my finger on the trigger Hope there are not that many mistakes in it since I'm not a native English speaker and I normally speak/write in Dutch ... i love these so much:wub2: and it's in perfect English nothing to worry:bleh: i really hope you post more poems they're really nice:wink2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
purplegrape Posted August 2, 2008 Share Posted August 2, 2008 heres one i wrote attempting to use a lyric from every mika song. i think i got most of them. and a couple lyrics from a song friom the movie Labyrinth. its pretty easy to tell what its about, and if you knew me than its extremely obvious who its about. the funny thing is, i lethim read it and he had no idea, hahahaha anyway: Love In Cartoon Motion We both know too much candy is gonna rot your soul, yet my sweet tooth yearns for the taste of your sugarcane lips Now I’m trying to replace a feeling without a name so I smile and try to mean it, to let myself let go but I’m left on a broken train with nobody I know Caught up in the reasons for the stupid things Ido I’ve got a dangerous obsession and it’s focused on you wondering how much you love me how much you care how much you miss me when I’m not there But reality abuses me with the piercing ice of your sightless eyes asthough I’m the only lonely one, so I live without your sunlight and love without your heartbeat Each time her name caresses your lips you fork out my daylight and torture my I’m intollerably blue at the thought of leaving you though I know you’ve already abandoned me I’ve never reall been together but I’ve never meant to fall apart I’ve fallen in love with you and I’m dreaming of what we might do cause I’ll paint you mornings of gold and spin you Valentine evenings I realize I must move on I could be hurtful but if anything should happen I guess I’d wish you well I won’t act like a fool cause you made me and I won’t be the clown that you made me your love may be what I need but not your sympathy. ~♥~ amber Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicfreak Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 heres one i wrote attempting to use a lyric from every mika song. i think i got most of them.and a couple lyrics from a song friom the movie Labyrinth. its pretty easy to tell what its about, and if you knew me than its extremely obvious who its about. the funny thing is, i lethim read it and he had no idea, hahahaha anyway: Love In Cartoon Motion We both know too much candy is gonna rot your soul, yet my sweet tooth yearns for the taste of your sugarcane lips Now I’m trying to replace a feeling without a name so I smile and try to mean it, to let myself let go but I’m left on a broken train with nobody I know Caught up in the reasons for the stupid things Ido I’ve got a dangerous obsession and it’s focused on you wondering how much you love me how much you care how much you miss me when I’m not there But reality abuses me with the piercing ice of your sightless eyes asthough I’m the only lonely one, so I live without your sunlight and love without your heartbeat Each time her name caresses your lips you fork out my daylight and torture my I’m intollerably blue at the thought of leaving you though I know you’ve already abandoned me I’ve never reall been together but I’ve never meant to fall apart I’ve fallen in love with you and I’m dreaming of what we might do cause I’ll paint you mornings of gold and spin you Valentine evenings I realize I must move on I could be hurtful but if anything should happen I guess I’d wish you well I won’t act like a fool cause you made me and I won’t be the clown that you made me your love may be what I need but not your sympathy. ~♥~ amber awww man that's really AWSOME! i love how you connected the lyrics from lots of different song:punk:....Labryinth was some movie..... hey Floridian! haha it's okay i don't like it much here either:naughty:what part are u from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
purplegrape Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 awww man that's really AWSOME! i love how you connected the lyrics from lots of different song:punk:....Labryinth was some movie..... hey Floridian! haha it's okay i don't like it much here either:naughty:what part are u from? it was some movie. my fav ever in fact!! David Bowie was so hot in that! a little nothing-to-do town called holiday. just above tarpon springs. do you know where that is? where are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musicfreak Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 it was some movie. my fav ever in fact!!David Bowie was so hot in that! a little nothing-to-do town called holiday. just above tarpon springs. do you know where that is? where are you? oh i know where that is...well Tarpon Springs anyway....i went there for a band competition.....[we nicknamed it Tampon Springs:roftl:] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted August 3, 2008 Author Share Posted August 3, 2008 heres one i wrote attempting to use a lyric from every mika song. i think i got most of them.and a couple lyrics from a song friom the movie Labyrinth. its pretty easy to tell what its about, and if you knew me than its extremely obvious who its about. the funny thing is, i lethim read it and he had no idea, hahahaha anyway: Love In Cartoon Motion We both know too much candy is gonna rot your soul, yet my sweet tooth yearns for the taste of your sugarcane lips Now I’m trying to replace a feeling without a name so I smile and try to mean it, to let myself let go but I’m left on a broken train with nobody I know Caught up in the reasons for the stupid things Ido I’ve got a dangerous obsession and it’s focused on you wondering how much you love me how much you care how much you miss me when I’m not there But reality abuses me with the piercing ice of your sightless eyes asthough I’m the only lonely one, so I live without your sunlight and love without your heartbeat Each time her name caresses your lips you fork out my daylight and torture my I’m intollerably blue at the thought of leaving you though I know you’ve already abandoned me I’ve never reall been together but I’ve never meant to fall apart I’ve fallen in love with you and I’m dreaming of what we might do cause I’ll paint you mornings of gold and spin you Valentine evenings I realize I must move on I could be hurtful but if anything should happen I guess I’d wish you well I won’t act like a fool cause you made me and I won’t be the clown that you made me your love may be what I need but not your sympathy. ~♥~ amber Oh! This one's really COOL!!! Why is it just a pain to live in Florida? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 Emili u r all the day here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Posted August 3, 2008 Author Share Posted August 3, 2008 Emili u r all the day here He he, you too darling:naughty: It's because I won't be here much next week:thumbdown: And I loooooooooove being here, I'm addicted, for real:drool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiff Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 Yeah... But I'm sure he'll like all of them. Anyway, I don't think he will personally tell us how he found our texts, so... Let's pretend he'll like them:naughty: I know how you feel about the language issue, it's not easy.Sometimes it's hard to understand and get the full meaning especially in poetry, but you have done a great job with Erase imo! Mika's Erase is one of my favourites, I know some call it too easy, a sell out, but to me it is about:"One of the stupid things you do when you let your emotions take charge of your common sense!":boxed: I really love both the lyrics and the way he sings that song! And to read your interpretation was the" icing of the cake!":wub2: Thanks Tiff! Thank you I really love erase too ... And I don't mind if people say it's simple. It's a beautiful song. i love these so much:wub2: and it's in perfect English nothing to worryi really hope you post more poems they're really nice Thanks! I'm glad I didn't write mistakes ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniella92 Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 He he, you too darling:naughty: It's because I won't be here much next week:thumbdown: And I loooooooooove being here, I'm addicted, for real:drool: Well me too,seems:droll: It's just...huh...Full of happenings:naughty: What did ya say bout mfc yearbook 2008???That u'll buy it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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