RosinaKiwi Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 Have you ever written a song? mika related or not! Post it here! Can be whole song but dosnt have to be Here is mine! I wrote this song as a dedication to my cousin MATT who commited suiside 2nd oct 2006, aged just 20. I was feeling considerably low about this subject mainly because I felt I should have been there or known him more while he was still alive. Untill I listened to mikas song my interpretation and it posessed me to make this song! My Guiding Lantern You are my life, my rock, my guiding light i thought you would always be there for me when I wanted you but now your gone, and it hurt me when you left, why did you leave so hastily, you never gave us a chance RED roses are not seen In this darkness we all feel We have lost all colour Waiting for you I needed you….. You were my guiding light To lead me on my way. This path to find out who I am And who I want to be and now Im lost, trying to find light, amidst all this darkness, it isn't easy to think that you May never come home when are you coming home, I need you here with me, I need some light in all this darkness, it's a feeling of hurt and a feeling of pain, I just want you home again, please come home and be my guiding light, my guiding light...... you hurt alot of people when you took it all the way, but we are all ready to forgive you, just please come home to me… you are… A light in all this darkness, this darkness they call life I cant find my way through A path of hurt and pain The roads of black and the fields of gray I need you guiding light A path of hurt and pain The roads of black and the fields of gray I need you guiding light A light in all this darkness, this darkness they call life I cant find my way through A light in all this darkness, Its A path of hurt and pain The roads of black and the fields of gray I need you guiding light Ok there, now its your turn! I have just shaired with you something that only select few people have ever seen! Dont be shy! BE PROUD!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nicole Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 As soon I saw that thread I was like Believe me...you do NOT wanna read my songs :lmao: RosinaKiwi: It's a pretty song..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IngievV Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 That's a beautiful song. I write lots of songs, here's one that's special to me, about a person that I totally hate now. But I'm not feeling like that anymore, like I descibed in the song. I feel rather cheerful and happy now:biggrin2: I will add a happy song when I find one. Torment Falling Falling deeper and deeper everytime That you say you hate me How come you can make me petrified I guess it happens, it happens now and then The way that you make me feel as if I'm the one to blame Always talking to me like I'm your slave It's torture, I can't escape You're the torment I've got to live with But it's so hard to let go You're the spider in my thoughts Eating my soul Bit by bit Losing it, everything I ever believed in Are you proud of damaging this faith? Intoxicated Intoxicated by everything you said You conducted me, Conducted me through the wrong path And I feel cold, so cold, I'm almost freezing I can barely live with myself And I run and run, I'm out of breath But I still can't get out of this nightmare You're the torment I've got to live with But it's so hard to let go You're the spider in my thoughts Eating my soul Bit by bit Losing it, everything I ever believed in Are you proud of damaging this faith? I guess this heart of mine Was meant to bleed I guess this dreams of mine were meant to fade And I guess my life Was meant to collapse Falling You're my torment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RosinaKiwi Posted June 2, 2007 Author Share Posted June 2, 2007 As soon I saw that thread I was like Believe me...you do NOT wanna read my songs :lmao: RosinaKiwi: It's a pretty song..... Why not? IngievV thanks and wow your song is really emotional! like I can feel it when I read it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IngievV Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 thanks and wow your song is really emotional! like I can feel it when I read it! Thanks, I was absolutely furious and down when I wrote this, luckily I passed that stage... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RosinaKiwi Posted June 2, 2007 Author Share Posted June 2, 2007 Thanks, I was absolutely furious and down when I wrote this, luckily I passed that stage... If its anything like the way I was feeling writing it down kinda helped for me, in a way! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xLAURENx Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 i will post mine up here when ive finnished it!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nicole Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 Why not? Don't ask:naughty: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IngievV Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 If its anything like the way I was feeling writing it down kinda helped for me, in a way! I have this whole book full of songs that I wrote since I was nine. You can obviously see that the songs were happy then darker and now happy again:biggrin2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1kiwiabroad Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 wow. thats a very poetic song.well done! did you do music for graduate? I'm doing it for A level, and trust me, all the music i've written is no where near as good as that - can we hear the tune? will you sing it for us? we'd love to hear it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zsina Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 Hey I dont write songs but I will try!!! Coz I am a polihistor if I really want I can be good at anything!So: Next challenge:Songwriting Maybe it will take some time..but well....who knows? I could be good at it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clare Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 Have you ever written a song? mika related or not! Post it here! Can be whole song but dosnt have to be Here is mine! I wrote this song as a dedication to my cousin MATT who commited suiside 2nd oct 2006, aged just 20. I was feeling considerably low about this subject mainly because I felt I should have been there or known him more while he was still alive. Untill I listened to mikas song my interpretation and it posessed me to make this song! My Guiding Lantern You are my life, my rock, my guiding light i thought you would always be there for me when I wanted you but now your gone, and it hurt me when you left, why did you leave so hastily, you never gave us a chance RED roses are not seen In this darkness we all feel We have lost all colour Waiting for you I needed you….. You were my guiding light To lead me on my way. This path to find out who I am And who I want to be and now Im lost, trying to find light, amidst all this darkness, it isn't easy to think that you May never come home when are you coming home, I need you here with me, I need some light in all this darkness, it's a feeling of hurt and a feeling of pain, I just want you home again, please come home and be my guiding light, my guiding light...... you hurt alot of people when you took it all the way, but we are all ready to forgive you, just please come home to me… you are… A light in all this darkness, this darkness they call life I cant find my way through A path of hurt and pain The roads of black and the fields of gray I need you guiding light A path of hurt and pain The roads of black and the fields of gray I need you guiding light A light in all this darkness, this darkness they call life I cant find my way through A light in all this darkness, Its A path of hurt and pain The roads of black and the fields of gray I need you guiding light Ok there, now its your turn! I have just shaired with you something that only select few people have ever seen! Dont be shy! BE PROUD!!! So so sorry to hear your loss. That was a lovely song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IngievV Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 Not a cheerful song, but one I wrote for my grandfather who passed away 8 years ago. I felt like sharing this with you all. Funny, since I never let anyone read these lyrics, because I'm afraid of the reactions I might get:wink2: Candle You told me that I never should let tears win over That you love me, but it was time to say goodbye But I cannot say I will not miss you, I cannot say I won't cry For only tears can heal this broken heart of mine. And every second I'm alone, thinking how it used to be Now I slowly realise you'll never be here with me again Never Chorus And your candle was blown out by the wind Your voice will never fill this room again You fought for your life, but you had to surrender You're the part of my life, I'll always remember We were two of a kind And it seemed like we could never be torn apart You told me about losing and winning Now I wish we could go back to the beginning When you held me so tight, promised me to always be by my side But today, we had to say goodbye Chorus And your candle was blown out by the wind You knew your time on earth would fade And when I held your hand, and touched your cold face I knew that it was over But I still feel that you're here with me Watching every move I make And the greatest gift I could give you was the send you away Release you from all the pain Chorus And your candle was blown out by the wind Your voice will never fill this room again You fought for your life, but you had to surrender You're the part of my life, I'll always remember And your candle was blown out by the wind You knew your time on earth would fade And when I held your hand, and touched your cold face I knew that it was over Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RosinaKiwi Posted June 2, 2007 Author Share Posted June 2, 2007 wow. thats a very poetic song.well done! did you do music for graduate? I'm doing it for A level, and trust me, all the music i've written is no where near as good as that - can we hear the tune? will you sing it for us? we'd love to hear it! I'm sorry? who's song where you talking about? i think they are all great again IngievV All the songs so far are great! please keep them coming Wow there is some real talent here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
havingablast Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 LOL I posted the start of a song I had once a long time ago on another site then my friend ims me like, half a year later, telling me to listen to 'teenagers' by MCR, and i swear that there were a few lines that were nearly identical to mine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RosinaKiwi Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 LOLI posted the start of a song I had once a long time ago on another site then my friend ims me like, half a year later, telling me to listen to 'teenagers' by MCR, and i swear that there were a few lines that were nearly identical to mine... I had to change My Guiding lantern because it was a bit like one of the songs by new Zealand born Australian based band EVERMORE! funny thing is though I wrote the song way before I had even heard any of the bands music! the tune....well its not complete! I have trouble reading and writing music so I just keep it in my head! Thats the best place for it i think! at least no one can copy it then! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_loves_mika Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 My fave song i ever wrote is Crazy About You. Ill post the lyrics, however it has been copyrighted by my management company, so anyone who tries to rip it off, could see a huge court case coming their way.... :biggrin: no joke (hear it at http://www.myspace.com/sarahmccluskey2006) Crazy about you (For Lewis...) It seems, that nothing goes my way And life, just wants to get me down Strange i know, but in this little world People always wanna push me around Ill spread, my fragile little wings But everytime i fly i just fall down Ill take, my life in my own hands And pray to God it'll never let me drown And yeah, there's gotta be someone out there And yeah, there's gotta be something more And yeah, oooh, if anyone can reach me Im falling deeper down and down, and down and out and anyway ive Died tonight, At least i can say i Tried tonight, Cause i am just so Broken inside, No longer alive God knows, im Crazy About You It's too late, to even wonder how How this could have been and what went wrong In my head things keep telling me how How i guess i knew it all along All i want, is a little peace of mind Somebody to tell me its ok All i need, is a little bit of hope I know that you cant give that anyway And yeah, there's gotta be someone out there And yeah, there's gotta be something more And yeah, oooh, if anyone can save me Cause i have been to hell and back, and back again and anyway ive Died tonight, At least i can say i Tried tonight, Cause i am just so Broken inside, No longer alive God knows, im Crazy About You (middle 8) A little bit of hope Little peace of mind A little bit of love why arent you mine? Im praying everyday This pain will fade away And i could face the world If you were mine It seems that nothing goes my way And life just wants to see me drown Cause ive Died tonight, At least i can say i Tried tonight, Cause i am just so Broken inside, No longer alive God knows, im Crazy About You So i wont, fight no more, Cos everytime i Stumble and fall, So i want you to, Take me away, Together we'll stay God knows, im crazy about you And all the crazy things you do I guess ill have to be crazy without you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_loves_mika Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 By the way, some of these songs are really gorgeous on here, if anybody would like me to put music to some of them, id be more than happy to. Check my work on my myspace (as posted above) ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IngievV Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 By the way, some of these songs are really gorgeous on here, if anybody would like me to put music to some of them, id be more than happy to. Could you do that? I suck at music, I only do the lyrics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RosinaKiwi Posted June 5, 2007 Author Share Posted June 5, 2007 By the way, some of these songs are really gorgeous on here, if anybody would like me to put music to some of them, id be more than happy to. Check my work on my myspace (as posted above) ^ please! i cant read music and dont own any music to compose my own! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IngievV Posted June 5, 2007 Share Posted June 5, 2007 please! i cant read music and dont own any music to compose my own! I'm music blind, I can read music just as well as elephants are able to fly:naughty: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sara Posted June 5, 2007 Share Posted June 5, 2007 My song writing remains private for the mo. I am sure i will share one day though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaMango Posted June 5, 2007 Share Posted June 5, 2007 The third song on my MySpace page is an original composition (You're My World). I wrote it when I was 17, about the one who got away. (Sigh...) I guess I could dedicate it to Mika. http://www.myspace.com/RaniLovezYou Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RosinaKiwi Posted June 7, 2007 Author Share Posted June 7, 2007 I'm music blind, I can read music just as well as elephants are able to fly:naughty: so like me then, i know i can compose my own on a piano but the only piano and/or organ that is around me is at the local library! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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