MIKAmadRosie1996 Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 CHAPTER 1 It was 1996 and mika, fortune, paloma and yasmin had to be sent to the countryside because on the war. On the train, it was very boring and everyone fell asleep apat from the younest, little mika who was worried about his parents, living in their cold house, listening to the planes and worrying of he would ever see his parents again.... the train stopped and the penniman siblings stepped off the train and stood, waiting to be picked and hoping that they would be together. Everyone was picked and the pennimans were the only ones left and they were beggining to lose hope when a scary looking man who looked a bit like this- came riding over in a carrige being pulled by 4 white horses. "hello my name is simon cowell and i will be taking you to happy ending hall to meet raffa cobeiski who will be in charge of you untill the war is over" said simon. the kids were totally stunned at simon and his big white grin and plain t-shirt and got into the carrige without a single word. the ride seemed neverending and simon went over the rules of the manor: no bad singing no running no rubbish dancing no playing my piano no getting on peoples nerves no shouting no touching any historical atifacts ect after a tantalising 3 hour drive, happy ending hall came into sight..... to be continued.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIKAmadRosie1996 Posted November 8, 2008 Author Share Posted November 8, 2008 comments are welcome!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lena Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 I badly perceive style of a writing... It should be ridiculous? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIKAmadRosie1996 Posted November 8, 2008 Author Share Posted November 8, 2008 I badly perceive style of a writing... It should be ridiculous? yeah sorry im not good at writing, but it is sposed to be funnu, it ets weirder in chapter 2! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lena Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 To me to talk it is useless, if I do not understand a theme)). I do not know language.)). Funny, you speak? There there were words about war, it somehow not funny sounds... I at all have not understood, this beginning as though of the story or the script? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIKAmadRosie1996 Posted November 9, 2008 Author Share Posted November 9, 2008 i speak english:wink2: basicly, the children are evacuated to happy ending hall and the story is based on the lion, the which and the wardrobe:thumb_yello: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkLight Posted November 10, 2008 Share Posted November 10, 2008 hmm interesting story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IngievV Posted November 10, 2008 Share Posted November 10, 2008 Interesting but actually, Fortuné is the youngest and did they leave Zuleika Allegra behind? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIKAmadRosie1996 Posted November 11, 2008 Author Share Posted November 11, 2008 just pretend mikas the youngest... yep they did, (pretend she was grown up and lived on her own or with a boyfriend or something)... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikasbestfriend Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 Interesting but actually, Fortuné is the youngest and did they leave Zuleika Allegra behind? Thats what I was thinking. But hey it sounds good so far. Im a little scared that they have to live with Simon Cowel though:boxed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIKAmadRosie1996 Posted November 11, 2008 Author Share Posted November 11, 2008 happy ending hall was so beautiful, the pennimans couldnt beleive it and immeadiately wanted to explore. simon led them inside and lined them up on the 2nd step of the grand marble staircase in age order, then raffa came out of a little room, talking excitedly to another mysterious woman with a scarf around her neck, face and head. "hello my dears, you must be the pennimans!, this is madame cherisse and she will be reading your palms later, but first you must go and unpack in your rooms. just follow the staircase up to the top, but mind you dont go in the tower! its dangerous. So fortune, yasmin and mika went all the way up the stair case and found the door to their bedroom, but as mika was smaller, he couldnt get up as fast and went through the tower door... to be continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
agathaxxx Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 oh no!!! not the tower door...poor little Mika!! um,what happened to the other sis that came with them? er Paloma i think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MIKAmadRosie1996 Posted November 15, 2008 Author Share Posted November 15, 2008 CHAPTER 3!!!!! Mika went right up to the tower and opened the large, old door and walked inside.... *wonders whether to write the next bit.... hhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........ ok* it was pitch black but strangely, too warm to be still in the tower.... :bleh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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