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Hello

 

 

I wanted to ask the French if MFC's can help me in my work French.

 

I have to make an oral presentation (in French) about Mika.

 

But I will use Power Point to read a few things.

 

Now I need your help to:

* helped me to write a short (very short) biography (Mika)

* helped me to write a text (small) on the most important concerts

 

I count on your help

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Hello

 

 

I wanted to ask the French if MFC's can help me in my work French.

 

I have to make an oral presentation (in French) about Mika.

 

But I will use Power Point to read a few things.

 

Now I need your help to:

* helped me to write a short (very short) biography (Mika)

* helped me to write a text (small) on the most important concerts

 

I count on your help

 

:sneaky2: you are not asking our members to do your work... are you?

i'm sure there are biographies out there in french that you could work from.

 

why don't you do the french and then ask for their help in correcting it?

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:sneaky2: you are not asking our members to do your work... are you?

i'm sure there are biographies out there in french that you could work from.

 

why don't you do the french and then ask for their help in correcting it?

 

 

No way! My work has 12 topics :naughty:

I have written one, but I think it is very bad! (Biography) :boxed:

Discography not know how to write it! :roftl:

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Thanks! I'll check for all sites and will compress the information! Merci

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Great work sweetie :clap:

A few things can be corrected like :

LICM de Mika est son premier DVD live

I don't undertand what you mean by "à la télévision d'appoint"

LPDP est le deuxième DVD live de Mika

D'un spectacle du départ

Une foule de 55 000 personnes

Mika réalise pour la première fois un concert au Portugal le 10 juillet

Une super fête

"Ou là encore...Mika surpris" needs to be rewritten, please tell me what you meant to write and I'll rephrase it

dont Mika a été la vedette instead of qui a été la vedette Mika

I really love what you did :wub2:

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Great work sweetie :clap:

A few things can be corrected like :

LICM de Mika est son premier DVD live

I don't undertand what you mean by "à la télévision d'appoint"

LPDP est le deuxième DVD live de Mika

D'un spectacle du départ

Une foule de 55 000 personnes

Mika réalise pour la première fois un concert au Portugal le 10 juillet

Une super fête

"Ou là encore...Mika surpris" needs to be rewritten, please tell me what you meant to write and I'll rephrase it

dont Mika a été la vedette instead of qui a été la vedette Mika

I really love what you did :wub2:

 

I think she was talking about he receiving television booster to show his videos

 

You should put the corrected things in boldface and in a dark color

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Just one thing:

 

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:blush-anim-cl::blush-anim-cl: Obrigado Bia

 

 

 

Great work sweetie :clap:

A few things can be corrected like :

LICM de Mika est son premier DVD live

I don't undertand what you mean by "à la télévision d'appoint"

LPDP est le deuxième DVD live de Mika

D'un spectacle du départ

Une foule de 55 000 personnes

Mika réalise pour la première fois un concert au Portugal le 10 juillet

Une super fête

"Ou là encore...Mika surpris" needs to be rewritten, please tell me what you meant to write and I'll rephrase it

dont Mika a été la vedette instead of qui a été la vedette Mika

I really love what you did :wub2:

 

 

Thanks! I'll fix the Power Point and I will put here!

 

 

I saw this on a site, think it was Wikipedia, I'll delete it.

 

I wanted to say "After the hearts of gold and 35,000 on releasing balloons Mika was surprised.

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Similar! You can see here how it was:

 

(Don't look at my face please)

 

And here:

 

 

Oh.. so cool.. It's like.. This.. :wub2:

 

 

I'm PRETTY sure that you've seen it.. but. :wink2:

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