Shontih Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 it still sounds odd in my head but I love it! Brilliant, steph!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dee Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 Yeh I do see the theme in it. He might have a good laugh, but probably would go for it(but this is just me thinking that he would). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sasje Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 Wow, a great song!!! I wonder how it sounds on Mika's music!!! It has to be a no. 1 song!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted March 26, 2007 Author Share Posted March 26, 2007 Wow, a great song!!! I wonder how it sounds on Mika's music!!! It has to be a no. 1 song!! haha, it's his own words and (hopefully) he will put it to some music and play it to us, maybe just once... ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dee Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 If he reads this site, he might want to put it on his next album for his fans. I would hope that he would so all the fans can here it, not just the one who can make it to his concerts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sity Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 right here goes so far... cold, drunk, tired, lost.... oh oh oh is there anybody home I wanna talk to you So human as I am do I attract u? do I repulse u with my queasy smile? ah, who will believe me, won't deceive me, won't try to change me I guess I'm a little bit shy why don't you like me without making me try? yo Mika! who wants to have me, just to love me? a whole lotta woman needs a whole lotta more! Say goodbye to the world you thought you lived in all these illusions, they really mean the world to me in any other world you could tell the difference You talk about me, and you talk about you, the things we left unsaid... love love me love love Push me back against the wall this is not about emotions shock schock me, shock schock me you have a dangerous obsession don't let the stars get you down shock schock me, shock schock me smile like you mean it,well you ain't gonna tease no other cause this is my interpretation anyway you want to, anyway you've got to shock schock me, shock schock me licks her lips like they're something other hey, what's the big idea? gonna make you a lover lovel ove me love love me say love say love love love me love love me gonna make you a lover love love me love love me say love say love love love me love love me well so far so good tried to please most... any comments??? Looks nice! And my lyrics are the frirst ones!! I think it goes: Cold, drunk, time; lost... I just can't hear it "tired"... It's not your fault I know!! I wrote it wrong by myself... But I think it doesn't harm the song if you could change it "Cold, drunk, time; lost"...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted March 26, 2007 Author Share Posted March 26, 2007 right here goes so far... cold, drunk, time; lost.... oh oh oh is there anybody home I wanna talk to you So human as I am do I attract u? do I repulse u with my queasy smile? ah, who will believe me, won't deceive me, won't try to change me I guess I'm a little bit shy why don't you like me without making me try? yo Mika! who wants to have me, just to love me? a whole lotta woman needs a whole lotta more! Say goodbye to the world you thought you lived in all these illusions, they really mean the world to me in any other world you could tell the difference You talk about me, and you talk about you, the things we left unsaid... love love me love love Push me back against the wall this is not about emotions shock schock me, shock schock me you have a dangerous obsession don't let the stars get you down shock schock me, shock schock me smile like you mean it,well you ain't gonna tease no other cause this is my interpretation anyway you want to, anyway you've got to shock schock me, shock schock me licks her lips like they're something other hey, what's the big idea? gonna make you a lover lovel ove me love love me say love say love love love me love love me gonna make you a lover love love me love love me say love say love love love me love love me just corrected it, I should have spotted it, that is it,,...any mor suggestions, comments:sneaky2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted March 26, 2007 Author Share Posted March 26, 2007 If he reads this site, he might want to put it on his next album for his fans. I would hope that he would so all the fans can here it, not just the one who can make it to his concerts. would be nice, but not likely.. ..I'd just like him to play it for us as a last song at his gigs ..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
***<3MiKa<3*** Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 I look at you, you look at me, we bite each other!!! :) X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sity Posted March 26, 2007 Share Posted March 26, 2007 Thanks for correcting it! Would've been embarrassing for me to have it wrong... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted March 26, 2007 Author Share Posted March 26, 2007 I look at you' date=' you look at me, we bite each other!!! :) X[/quote'] oh, okay, I'll add this somewhere...thanks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted March 26, 2007 Author Share Posted March 26, 2007 I look at you' date=' you look at me, we bite each other!!! :) X[/quote'] I'm not so sure where to add it....I'll have to think.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted March 26, 2007 Author Share Posted March 26, 2007 right here goes so far... cold, drunk, time; lost.... oh oh oh is there anybody home I wanna talk to you So human as I am do I attract u? do I repulse u with my queasy smile? ah, who will believe me, won't deceive me, won't try to change me I guess I'm a little bit shy why don't you like me without making me try? yo Mika! who wants to have me, just to love me? a whole lotta woman needs a whole lotta more! Say goodbye to the world you thought you lived in all these illusions, they really mean the world to me in any other world you could tell the difference You talk about me, and you talk about you, the things we left unsaid... love love me love love Push me back against the wall this is not about emotions shock schock me, shock schock me you have a dangerous obsession don't let the stars get you down shock schock me, shock schock me smile like you mean it,well you ain't gonna tease no other cause this is my interpretation anyway you want to, anyway you've got to shock schock me, shock schock me licks her lips like they're something other hey, what's the big idea? gonna make you a lover lovel ove me love love me say love say love love love me love love me gonna make you a lover love love me love love me say love say love love love me love love me HELP! where just tell me please where shall I put this latecoming line: 'I look at you, you look at me, we bite each other!!!' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted March 27, 2007 Author Share Posted March 27, 2007 i really don't see where I can slot the line in, it would change from me to you, unless someone knows where...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dee Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 How about this, I highlighted the spot where I think it my work. cold, drunk, time; lost.... oh oh oh is there anybody home I wanna talk to you So human as I am do I attract u? do I repulse u with my queasy smile? ah, who will believe me, won't deceive me, won't try to change me I guess I'm a little bit shy why don't you like me without making me try? yo Mika! who wants to have me, just to love me? a whole lotta woman needs a whole lotta more! Say goodbye to the world you thought you lived in all these illusions, they really mean the world to me in any other world you could tell the difference You talk about me, and you talk about you, the things we left unsaid... love love me love love Push me back against the wall this is not about emotions 'I look at you, you look at me, we bite each other!!!' shock schock me, shock schock me you have a dangerous obsession don't let the stars get you down shock schock me, shock schock me smile like you mean it,well you ain't gonna tease no other cause this is my interpretation anyway you want to, anyway you've got to shock schock me, shock schock me licks her lips like they're something other hey, what's the big idea? gonna make you a lover lovel ove me love love me say love say love love love me love love me gonna make you a lover love love me love love me say love say love love love me love love me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
electasy Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 First of all, Steph, GREAT job! Some of those lines just fit together so perfectly! Much better than I thought it could be. And Dee, I think that is the perfect place for that line. A+ and gold stars to both of you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FREDDIESDOUBLE Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 Steph a genius we have! , great job <serves drinks> sorry habit:thumb_yello: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted March 27, 2007 Author Share Posted March 27, 2007 How about this, I highlighted the spot where I think it my work. cold, drunk, time; lost.... oh oh oh is there anybody home I wanna talk to you So human as I am do I attract u? do I repulse u with my queasy smile? ah, who will believe me, won't deceive me, won't try to change me I guess I'm a little bit shy why don't you like me without making me try? yo Mika! who wants to have me, just to love me? a whole lotta woman needs a whole lotta more! Say goodbye to the world you thought you lived in all these illusions, they really mean the world to me in any other world you could tell the difference You talk about me, and you talk about you, the things we left unsaid... love love me love love Push me back against the wall this is not about emotions 'I look at you, you look at me, we bite each other!!!' shock schock me, shock schock me you have a dangerous obsession don't let the stars get you down shock schock me, shock schock me smile like you mean it,well you ain't gonna tease no other cause this is my interpretation anyway you want to, anyway you've got to shock schock me, shock schock me licks her lips like they're something other hey, what's the big idea? gonna make you a lover lovel ove me love love me say love say love love love me love love me gonna make you a lover love love me love love me say love say love love love me love love me thanks, brilliant, that's where it's going to go, thanks.., all sorted, unless someone else wants to add a line, if so, please read the lyric first...to make sure it can fit, thanks!.. :thumb_yello: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grace_Kelly Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 I want to add "I try be like Grace Kelly" but it doesnt fit =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted March 27, 2007 Author Share Posted March 27, 2007 I want to add "I try be like Grace Kelly" but it doesnt fit =/ It's a good line but I agree, it does not fit with our song now...so sorry, try something else or see if the other lines are not one of your favourite:thumb_yello: s.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dee Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 Glad I could be of assistance. I used to write songs when I was about 12 or 13 years old after my grandmother passed away. She was my inspiration, but know I don't really do it anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steph Posted March 27, 2007 Author Share Posted March 27, 2007 Glad I could be of assistance. I used to write songs when I was about 12 or 13 years old after my grandmother passed away. She was my inspiration, but know I don't really do it anymore. you should take it up again.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sunshine931 Posted March 28, 2007 Share Posted March 28, 2007 The song is coming along great Steph !!! Good job !!! Although I would just like to point out that it's "push my back against the wall" and not "push me back..."... and glad you could fit "I look at you, you look at me, we bite each other" in... I love that line !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dee Posted March 28, 2007 Share Posted March 28, 2007 I would love to take it up again but theres too much clutter in my brain. I had to turn my life around last year and know I'm trying to find my way back. You know, take one step forward and a gazilion steps back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Posted March 28, 2007 Share Posted March 28, 2007 Am I still in time to make a contribution? I was just listening to Your Sympathy (over and over and over and so on) and I thought this line would fit into the song: Maybe love is what I need Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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