CazGirl Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 As some of you know, I am studying ChildCare. In this course we had to make a story book for children between the ages of 4-6. We had to make up the story ourselves and draw the pictures...literally everything. This, this is the final piece (still gotta colour a few pieces here and there and they're very minor things) and I know it's not completely perfect...but never mind... The teachers at my college love it and the students really like it too...I was wondering what you guys thought? These pics were taken on my phone so they're not fantastic quality. Thanks guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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CazGirl Posted May 26, 2008 Author Share Posted May 26, 2008 ta duh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CazGirl Posted May 26, 2008 Author Share Posted May 26, 2008 come on guys, some feedback would be super and yes, i'm well aware that starfish dont live on land LOL i just didnt think at the time XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CazGirl Posted May 26, 2008 Author Share Posted May 26, 2008 please? someone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MegPL Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 please? someone? I love the story and you know your drawings are magical love it and you do realize you sound a little bit desperate...right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xBillyBrownx Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 Wowwww this is amazing!! Great job! Love the illustrations they're so good! Well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vanessa Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 They are great !!!I love your illustrations ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pam Travers Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 clap your hands say yeah great band, innit? nice bracelet cazgirl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoseOle Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 Teehee! This is great! I especially love the drawings of the underwater animals! They're so cute! It's a cute story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAK1 Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 Caz, your story is lovely, and the illustrations are fantastic, a little manga creeping in there in the style, which is no bad thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CazGirl Posted May 26, 2008 Author Share Posted May 26, 2008 Caz, your story is lovely, and the illustrations are fantastic, a little manga creeping in there in the style, which is no bad thing. yarp lol! you only see animé characters in manga (manga is the actual jap comic, animé are the actual drawings) and i wanted to bring animé into my story, without making it manga-fied (that's reading back to front and set out like an actual comic). I'm glad everyone likes it! and greta; no, i haven't started *that* yet. That will come into play when the last chapter is complete and when i finish my childcare course. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_Lollipop Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 It's a great story and the illustrations are brilliant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomomi Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 I love this. Illustrations are cute and the story is easy enough to read even for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pam Travers Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 Illustrations are cute and the story is easy enough to read even for me. lmao same here:naughty: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikalovernj Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 really good! *controls perfectionism* *cant control perfectionism* for future reference, i think that you wouldnt say "it was her that was crying", you would say "it was her who was crying", considering you are referring to a person Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
agnieszka Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 i like it a lot! and the drawings are are the kids demanding new parts already? is THIS the reason why u're gonna stop writing scripts for us? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mici Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 CazGirl, very well done. The characters are full of life and expressions just what children books suppose to be. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CazGirl Posted May 26, 2008 Author Share Posted May 26, 2008 really good! *controls perfectionism* *cant control perfectionism* for future reference, i think that you wouldnt say "it was her that was crying", you would say "it was her who was crying", considering you are referring to a person oh i know, a friend pointed it out to me after i stuck everything in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CazGirl Posted May 26, 2008 Author Share Posted May 26, 2008 i like it a lot! and the drawings are are the kids demanding new parts already? is THIS the reason why u're gonna stop writing scripts for us? i haven't read it to them yet, though they know it's coming. they're really looking forward to it LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elise_xx Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 Did you seriously draw that?! I want a bracelet like that ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CazGirl Posted May 26, 2008 Author Share Posted May 26, 2008 Did you seriously draw that?! I want a bracelet like that ! yup, i drew everything. and you want a bracelet made of seaweed? nice! lmao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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