mary* Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 Hope I did this thread in a right place. so, this is my english project about London:naughty: (some of mfcers knew i was making this) and i want to ask you all, is it good, or what should I add HELP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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qwurtie Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 It's good ;D except....WHERE IS MIKA???!? :aah: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mina Alisa Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 wow looks great!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crick! Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 You did a great job, and I think it's very useful! I love England Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doll_of_death Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 It's very good Mary:thumb_yello:your teacher will like it for sure:naughty: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mary* Posted October 28, 2011 Author Share Posted October 28, 2011 thank you all guys! but don't you think it needs smth to add? or make it even shorter? It's good ;D except....WHERE IS MIKA???!? :aah: in that college above Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silver Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 Do you want your English corrected? For example we would say just "Chinatown", not "The Chinatown". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mary* Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 Do you want your English corrected? For example we would say just "Chinatown", not "The Chinatown". thank you can you tell me please if there's still any mistake? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikahepburn Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 viewing this thread just making me want to go to England more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STEP___ Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Hope I did this thread in a right place. so, this is my english project about London:naughty: (some of mfcers knew i was making this) and i want to ask you all, is it good, or what should I add HELP! It's so good, you did really well. I think you shouldn't add more, but don't shorten it either! Only one remark, English is not my mothertongue, but I have a feeling this one sentence isn't so fluent: "its history going back to its founding founding by the Romans,..." I'm not sure, but wouldn't be "its history goes back to its founding..." be better? Not sure though. You could be right too! It's just quite a long sentence I think:aah: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mary* Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 It's so good, you did really well. I think you shouldn't add more, but don't shorten it either!Only one remark, English is not my mothertongue, but I have a feeling this one sentence isn't so fluent: "its history going back to its founding founding by the Romans,..." I'm not sure, but wouldn't be "its history goes back to its founding..." be better? Not sure though. You could be right too! It's just quite a long sentence I think:aah: I have no idea I copied it from Wikipedia hope it's correct, if not it's ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
astor Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 It's so good, you did really well. I think you shouldn't add more, but don't shorten it either!Only one remark, English is not my mothertongue, but I have a feeling this one sentence isn't so fluent: "its history going back to its founding founding by the Romans,..." I'm not sure, but wouldn't be "its history goes back to its founding..." be better? Not sure though. You could be right too! It's just quite a long sentence I think:aah: Yes, I would say this makes more sense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollipop_monkey Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 I'm not sure, but wouldn't "its history goes back to its founding..." be better? Not sure though. You could be right too! It's just quite a long sentence I think:aah: This is correct - you would use "goes" rather than "going" in this sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazyaboutmika Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Great job Shouldn't this be in the homework thread though? It's a school project, not a MFC project... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollipop_monkey Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 Great job Shouldn't this be in the homework thread though? It's a school project, not a MFC project... Yeah, I was debating whether or not to move it. Good call - I'll move it to the chinwagging section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mary* Posted October 30, 2011 Author Share Posted October 30, 2011 I changed "going" with "goes", thank you guys Yeah, I was debating whether or not to move it. Good call - I'll move it to the chinwagging section. thanks I didn't know where to make this thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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